Wow, you really tackled a tough problem by adding wind to the mix! :D
Overall, I think you did a good job. You positioned the folds well, and you even tested it with rolled-up sleeves and everything. However, pay attention to accurately following the volume of the body (for example, in exercise 2, on one side the skirt is close to the body, and on the other, there's a gap of several centimeters â thatâs not logical). So yes, donât hesitate to think about the âgeometric shapeâ on which you place your clothes. For the arms, they are cylinders, so use rounded shapes. Don't hesitate to look at yourself in a mirror while putting yourself in a similar position to see what it looks like if you have any doubts. ^^
Otherwise, it's pretty good. The exercise with the wind was complex because you have to add that the wind (which is quite strong) you chose will add a new deformation to the clothes. Itâs as if you were adding new tension zones to the clothes. As a result, itâs complicated to grasp. I pointed out many small things to improve your drawing, including applying them to the hair as well.
But apart from that, I approve. You have generally grasped the principle well. You will naturally improve with practice đ
Apart from the pleats at the front of the knee on the menâs trousers (they should be at the back, as thatâs where the bending occurs), everything else looks good :3
Hello Aloha o/
Hormis les plis Ă l'avant du genou pour l'homme (ils devraient ĂȘtre Ă l'arriĂšre, car c'est derriĂšre que ça se plie), le reste fonctionne bien :3
There are some good things, but also some things that donât work. The creases in the pants are very, very strong (usually, creases are light so as not to attract too much attention), and they are poorly placed. The same goes for the creases on the chest. You may have already seen the correction video, but Iâm attaching a quick retouch here. By the way, your second drawing wasnât sent.
Hello Milpertui, normally, to get feedback, you need to post in the threads tagged âcorrectionsâ when there are any.
Iâm making an exception this time, but youâll need to pay attention next time :)
Regarding your character, there are very few folds. There are missing folds around the pants (at the level of the thigh/pubic crease). Otherwise, since these are clothes that are relatively close to the body, and the character isnât making any particular movements and is standing straight, there arenât many folds that would naturally appear. But the ones youâve placed are good :)
Normally, you should have posted your drawing in the "Correction" section, but it's not a big deal. Just keep that in mind for next time ^^.
If you can't find your way, it's: COMMUNITY -> FORUM -> MANGA -> the correction section that corresponds to your exercise :)
So, your drawing is really good :)
You put a lot of effort into it, and it shows.
Let's take a closer look at this young girl ^^
Let's start from the top.
I think the shirt of your girl has folds that aren't smoothed out enough.
With the tension and gravity, they should be stretched more downwards, given that her arms are down.
For the skirt, it's still a matter of folds.
"Sailor-style" skirts have specific, very sharp, and straight folds.
In your drawing, you've created the height between the parts of the skirt in a stepped pattern. However, that doesn't work here. The fabric can't be folded and shaped like that.
Try folding a piece of paper in this way, and you'll see that the spacing is very small or even non-existent.
For the jacket, my main concern is the knot.
The jacket around the hips isn't the easiest thing to draw, and the best way to understand how it works is to look at photo references if you have them. (If not, take a photo of yourself wearing the clothes and in the pose as a reference; that's what I often do ^^).
Don't hesitate to give thickness and volume to your clothes :)
Not all fabrics are as thin as linen ^^.
Finally, let's talk about the socks.
This is a very personal opinion, but I think leg warmers don't work well when they're high.
They are very thick socks with a lot of material. Their own weight makes them fall down to the shins or ankles, so they really only work when they are low on the leg.
High socks in general are very close to the leg to prevent them from falling or slipping.
That's it! :)
Folds are really one of the most complex things to do when drawing clothes, so don't get discouraged :)
It will come with time ^^.
Bonjour Capucine !
Normalement c'est dans "Correction" que tu aurais dĂ» poster ton dessin mais ce n'est pas grave.
Pense y juste la prochaine fois ^^
Si tu ne trouves pas le chemin c'est : COMMUNAUTE --> FORUM --> MANGA --> la correction qui correspond a ton exercice :)
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12/05/2020
I tried to draw a character in a dynamic pose... đđ
J ai tentĂ© de dessiner un perso dans le vent... đđ
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25/05/2020
Wow, you really tackled a tough problem by adding wind to the mix! :D
Overall, I think you did a good job. You positioned the folds well, and you even tested it with rolled-up sleeves and everything. However, pay attention to accurately following the volume of the body (for example, in exercise 2, on one side the skirt is close to the body, and on the other, there's a gap of several centimeters â thatâs not logical). So yes, donât hesitate to think about the âgeometric shapeâ on which you place your clothes. For the arms, they are cylinders, so use rounded shapes. Don't hesitate to look at yourself in a mirror while putting yourself in a similar position to see what it looks like if you have any doubts. ^^
Otherwise, it's pretty good. The exercise with the wind was complex because you have to add that the wind (which is quite strong) you chose will add a new deformation to the clothes. Itâs as if you were adding new tension zones to the clothes. As a result, itâs complicated to grasp. I pointed out many small things to improve your drawing, including applying them to the hair as well.
But apart from that, I approve. You have generally grasped the principle well. You will naturally improve with practice đ
Oh tu t'es attaqué à un sacré problÚme en ajoutant du vent en plus :D
Globalement tu t'en sors bien je trouve, tu places bien les plus, tu as testĂ© avec des manches retroussĂ©es et tout. Attention par contre Ă bien suivre le volume du corps (par exemple, l'exo 2, d'un cĂŽtĂ© la jupe est collĂ©e au corps, de l'autre il y a une marge de plusieurs centimĂštres >> pas logique). Donc oui, n'hĂ©site pas Ă rĂ©flĂ©chir Ă la "forme gĂ©omĂ©trique" sur laquelle tu poses tes vĂȘtements. Pour les bras, ce sont des cylindres, donc arrondi. N'hĂ©site pas Ă te regarder dans une glace en te mettant dans un position similaire pour voir ce que ça fait si tu as un doute ^^
Autrement, c'est pas mal du tout. L'exercice avec le vent Ă©tait complexe, parce qu'il faut ajouter à ça que le vent (assez fort en plus) que tu as choisi va ajoute une nouvelle dĂ©formation aux vĂȘtements. C'est comme si tu rajoutais de nouvelles zones de tension aux vĂȘtements. Du coup c'est compliquĂ© Ă apprĂ©hender. Je t'ai indiquĂ© pleins de petite choses pour amĂ©liorer ton dessin, y compris en appliquant ça sur les cheveux aussi.
Mais Ă part ça, je te valide, tu as globalement bien saisi le principe. Tu t'amĂ©lioreras naturellement avec la pratique đ
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Here is my first complete manga. Would you mind giving me your feedback, please?
Thank you.
Voici mon premier manga entier. Voulez-vous bien me donner votre avis, sâil vous plaĂźt?
Merciđ
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25/07/2020
Itâs working very well :D
You could improve the swirls by not aligning them and making them slightly less uniform. Something like this: https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1QiFjQpXXXXbhXpXXq6xXFXXXr/Jupon-Sexy-Satin-Mini-Tutu-jupe-taille-lastique-robe-de-bal-volants-froufrous-Corset-jupes.jpg
Ăa marche trĂšs bien :D
Tu pourrais améliorer les volants en ne les alignant pas et en les faisant un poil moins réguliers. Un peu comme ici : https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1QiFjQpXXXXbhXpXXq6xXFXXXr/Jupon-Sexy-Satin-Mini-Tutu-jupe-taille-lastique-robe-de-bal-volants-froufrous-Corset-jupes.jpg
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Here are my drawings, a little lateâŠ
Thank you in advance for your reply :)
Bye!
Voici mes dessins avec un peu de retard...
Merci d'avance pour votre réponse :)
Bye !
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Apart from the pleats at the front of the knee on the menâs trousers (they should be at the back, as thatâs where the bending occurs), everything else looks good :3
Hormis les plis Ă l'avant du genou pour l'homme (ils devraient ĂȘtre Ă l'arriĂšre, car c'est derriĂšre que ça se plie), le reste fonctionne bien :3
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There are some good things, but also some things that donât work. The creases in the pants are very, very strong (usually, creases are light so as not to attract too much attention), and they are poorly placed. The same goes for the creases on the chest. You may have already seen the correction video, but Iâm attaching a quick retouch here. By the way, your second drawing wasnât sent.
Y a des bonnes choses et d'autres qui ne fonctionnent pas. Les plis du pantalons sont trĂšs trĂšs trĂšs forts (en gĂ©nĂ©ral les plis sont lĂ©gers pour ne pas trop attirer l'oeil) et ils sont mal placĂ©. Ceux sur la poitrine aussi. Tu as peut-ĂȘtre dĂ©jĂ vu la vidĂ©o correction, mais je te joins une petite retouches rapide ^^ Ton deuxiĂšme dessin n'a pas Ă©tĂ© envoyĂ© par contre.
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Thank you.
Merci
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Iâm making an exception this time, but youâll need to pay attention next time :)
Regarding your character, there are very few folds. There are missing folds around the pants (at the level of the thigh/pubic crease). Otherwise, since these are clothes that are relatively close to the body, and the character isnât making any particular movements and is standing straight, there arenât many folds that would naturally appear. But the ones youâve placed are good :)
Je fais exception pour cette fois, mais il faudra faire attention les fois suivantes :)
Concernant ton personnage, il y a trĂšs peu de plis, il en manque au niveau du pantalon (au niveau de la pliure des cuisses / du pubis). Autrement, comme ce sont des vĂȘtements qui sont relativement prĂšs du corps, sur un personnage qui ne fait pas de mouvement particulier et se tient bien droit, on n'a pas beaucoup de plis qui se crĂ©ent. Mais ceux que tu as placĂ©s sont bons :)
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Here is my drawing! (Iâm not sure if this is the right place to send it, but here it isâŠ)
Thank you in advance.
VoilĂ mon dessin ! ( je sais pas si c'est ici qu'il faut l'envoyer mais bon...)
Merci d'avance
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Normally, you should have posted your drawing in the "Correction" section, but it's not a big deal. Just keep that in mind for next time ^^.
If you can't find your way, it's: COMMUNITY -> FORUM -> MANGA -> the correction section that corresponds to your exercise :)
So, your drawing is really good :)
You put a lot of effort into it, and it shows.
Let's take a closer look at this young girl ^^
Let's start from the top.
I think the shirt of your girl has folds that aren't smoothed out enough.
With the tension and gravity, they should be stretched more downwards, given that her arms are down.
For the skirt, it's still a matter of folds.
"Sailor-style" skirts have specific, very sharp, and straight folds.
In your drawing, you've created the height between the parts of the skirt in a stepped pattern. However, that doesn't work here. The fabric can't be folded and shaped like that.
Try folding a piece of paper in this way, and you'll see that the spacing is very small or even non-existent.
For the jacket, my main concern is the knot.
The jacket around the hips isn't the easiest thing to draw, and the best way to understand how it works is to look at photo references if you have them. (If not, take a photo of yourself wearing the clothes and in the pose as a reference; that's what I often do ^^).
Don't hesitate to give thickness and volume to your clothes :)
Not all fabrics are as thin as linen ^^.
Finally, let's talk about the socks.
This is a very personal opinion, but I think leg warmers don't work well when they're high.
They are very thick socks with a lot of material. Their own weight makes them fall down to the shins or ankles, so they really only work when they are low on the leg.
High socks in general are very close to the leg to prevent them from falling or slipping.
That's it! :)
Folds are really one of the most complex things to do when drawing clothes, so don't get discouraged :)
It will come with time ^^.
Normalement c'est dans "Correction" que tu aurais dĂ» poster ton dessin mais ce n'est pas grave.
Pense y juste la prochaine fois ^^
Si tu ne trouves pas le chemin c'est : COMMUNAUTE --> FORUM --> MANGA --> la correction qui correspond a ton exercice :)
Alors, ton dessin est vraiment pas mal :)
Tu tâes donnĂ© du mal pour le faire et ça se voit
Regardons donc cette jeune fille de prĂšs ^^
Commençons par le haut .
La chemise de ta demoiselle a des plis pas suffisamment tirés je trouve.
Avec la tension et la gravitĂ©, ils devraient ĂȘtre plus Ă©tirĂ©s vers le bas Ă©tant donnĂ© que ses bras sont baissĂ©s.
Pour la jupe, toujours une question de plis.
Les jupe style âmarinâ ont des plis spĂ©cifiques trĂšs nets et droits.
dans ton dessin, tu as fait la hauteur entre les parties de la jupe en crĂ©neaux. Hors cela ne fonctionne ici. Le tissu ne peut pas ĂȘtre pliĂ© et donnĂ© cela.
Essaie de plier une feuille de cette maniĂšre et tu verras que lâespacement est trĂšs faible voir pas prĂ©sent du tout.
Pour la veste, mon souci majeur vient du nĆud.
La veste sur les hanches câest pas le plus simple Ă faire et le meilleur moyen de comprendre comment ça fonctionne est de regarder des rĂ©fĂ©rences photo si tu en as. (sinon prends toi en photo avec les vĂȘtement et la position en ref, câest ce que je fais souvent ^^ )
NâhĂ©site pas Ă donner de l'Ă©paisseur et du volume Ă tes vĂȘtements :)
Tous les tissus ne sont pas fins comme le lin ^^
Pour terminer les chaussettes.
Pour le coup, câest un avis trĂšs personnel mais je pense que les guĂȘtres ne fonctionnent pas lorsqu'elles sont hautes.
Ce sont des chaussettes trĂšs Ă©paisses et avec beaucoup de matiĂšre. Leur propre poids les fait tomber au niveau des tibias voir des chevilles. donc elle fonctionne vraiment que si elles sont basses sur la jambe.
Les chaussettes hautes en gĂ©nĂ©ral sont collĂ©es Ă la jambe trĂšs serrĂ©e justement pour Ă©viter quâelles ne tombent ou glissent.
VoilĂ ! :)
Les plis câest vraiment une des choses les plus complexes Ă faire lorsquâon dessine des vĂȘtements donc ne te dĂ©courage pas :)
Ca va venir avec le temps ^^
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