So, itâs quite remarkable because your eyes are the right size, they are quite well-positioned (a little too low for the girl in the picture), and they are well-drawn considering that. We donât have any issues with divergent eyes or anything like that.
But thereâs always one eye thatâs tilted for some obscure reason. Itâs less noticeable in the child, but Iâve highlighted the correct angle in green and the angle of the misaligned eye in red. If you correct the angle, youâll have perfect eyes.
For the boy, I think that in the end, his eyes are too much in profile, as if his face is turned more towards the side than it is in the current image. If you widen his eyes and rebalance the size (the one on the right is longer than the other), I think it will look better:
You just have a slight issue with the angle of the manâs eye. You have this same issue with the other two as well, but itâs much less noticeable and it works fine as is.
Iâm a complete beginner, Iâm just starting to draw, so itâs a bit of a disasterđ.
I think I did a better job with the woman and the child (even though I know itâs far from perfect), but the man is a complete mess. I canât seem to get the eyes right, especially in a three-quarter view. If you have one or two tips to help me, that would be great!
I wouldnât say itâs a disaster, but youâre missing a few key elements ^^
Indeed, you did a better job with the girl and the child. Iâll proceed in order:
The girl:
The eyes are well-placed, but I donât know why you added an outer line for the eyeball; the eyelashes at the outer corner of the eye are enough to close the eye ^^ And if you want the edge of the eye to be the eyeball, then your eyelashes should be attached to it. But even if your eyes are well-placed, they are too close together; remember, you should be able to place an eye between them, and thatâs not the case here. The eyes are also generally very small for manga; if you look, they are roughly the same size as the mouth or nose, which are supposed to be much smaller. You also have the eyebrow marker, which indicates their position and shows you how small the eyes are on her face. For a more European style, this would be perfectly fine, but in manga, itâs too subtle :)
The boy:
Here, we have small eyes again, too close together, but they are also poorly placed. Iâve drawn the line of the face and indicated the reference points you can use to position your elements ^^
The child:
Itâs not bad; one eye is too close to the other (asymmetry, so if you imagine him facing us, his eyes wouldnât be symmetrical at all).
Be careful, you tend to create divergent gazes as well. Align your irises in the same direction; these things can make a difference of just a few millimeters ^^ You often have the eye closest to us looking at us and the other looking straight ahead. You need to decide where you want to direct the gaze ^^
Attention, tu as tendance Ă faire des regards divergents aussi. Aligne bien tes iris dans la mĂȘme direction, ça peut se jouer au millimĂštre ce genre de choses ^^ Tu as souvent l'oeil le plus proche de nous qui nous regarde et l'autre qui regarde droit devant le personnage. Il faut choisir oĂč tu veux diriger le regard du coup ^^
The girl is perfect. The child is almost perfect too; you just made the eye a little too small (itâs reduced in width, but not in height).
For the boy, however, the placement isnât right, and the eye isnât âcut offâ at the edge of the face. Weâre kind of cheating to make sure itâs always included within the face.
Iâve attached a correction so you can see what I mean.
I think you posted this in the wrong thread, but Iâll correct it.
The nose is actually quite good. You did a good job with the 3/4 view and the profile. The nose starts a bit too low for a man (the indentation at the top of the nose should start at eye level, or even above).
However, when viewed head-on, your nose is as wide as it is in the 3/4 view or the profile, which is strange. You would almost have to flatten it a bit to make it more vertical.
Le nez est plutĂŽt pas mal, tu t'en sors bien de 3/4 et pas mal de profil (le nez commence trop bas pour l'homme (le creux du haut du nez commence au niveau des yeux, voir au-dessus)).
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Here are the results for the eyes. I have to admit that I found male eyes more difficult to draw. I would appreciate your feedback, please! đ
Voici le rĂ©sultat pour les yeux. Je dois admettre que j'ai trouvĂ© les yeux masculins plus difficiles Ă dessiner. J'aimerais avoir vos commentaires svp ! đ
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So, itâs quite remarkable because your eyes are the right size, they are quite well-positioned (a little too low for the girl in the picture), and they are well-drawn considering that. We donât have any issues with divergent eyes or anything like that.
But thereâs always one eye thatâs tilted for some obscure reason. Itâs less noticeable in the child, but Iâve highlighted the correct angle in green and the angle of the misaligned eye in red. If you correct the angle, youâll have perfect eyes.
Alors c'est assez dingue parce que, tes yeux ont la bonne taille, ils sont plutÎt bien placés (un peu trop bas pour la demoiselle), et bien réalisés avec ça.On n'a pas de souci de regard divergent ni rien.
Mais y en a toujours un qui est inclinĂ© pour une raison obscure. C'est moins flagrant chez l'enfant, mais je t'ai mis en vert le bon angle et en rouge l'angle de lâĆil dissident. Si tu corriges l'angle, tu a des yeux impeccables.
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Here is the corrected version!
Thank you for your quick responses!
Have a nice day.
Voici la correction !
Merci pour vos réponses rapide !
Belle journée
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For the boy, I think that in the end, his eyes are too much in profile, as if his face is turned more towards the side than it is in the current image. If you widen his eyes and rebalance the size (the one on the right is longer than the other), I think it will look better:
Pour le garçon, je pense au final que ses yeux sont trop de profil, comme si son visage était davantage tourné vers le profil qu'il ne l'est là . Si tu élargis ses yeux et rééquilibre la taille (celui à droite est plus long que l'autre) entre les deux ça me semble mieux :
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18/04/2020
This way is much prettier.
Thank you very much đ
cette façon est beaucoup plus jolie
merci beaucoupđ
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Itâs almost perfect :D
You just have a slight issue with the angle of the manâs eye. You have this same issue with the other two as well, but itâs much less noticeable and it works fine as is.
Aside from that, I approve ;p
C'est presque parfait :D
Tu as encore juste un petit souci d'inclinaison sur l'oeil de l'homme. Tu as ce souci sur les deux autres aussi, mais de maniÚre bien plus légÚre et ça passe tel quel.
Hormis ça, je valide ;p
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05/06/2020
I am submitting the revised work.
Have a good day.
Je mets le travail aprĂšs correction.
Bonne journée
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The only thing is that the right eye of the girl is a bit too small compared to the other one, but otherwise, everything looks good :)
Il y a juste l'oeil Ă droite de la demoiselle qui est trop petit par rapport Ă l'autre, sinon le reste marche bien :)
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Iâm a complete beginner, Iâm just starting to draw, so itâs a bit of a disasterđ.
I think I did a better job with the woman and the child (even though I know itâs far from perfect), but the man is a complete mess. I canât seem to get the eyes right, especially in a three-quarter view. If you have one or two tips to help me, that would be great!
Thanks in advance!
Je suis un gros débutant, je commence tout juste à dessiner donc c'est un peu
la catađ.
Je trouve que je m'en suis mieux sorti pour la femme et l'enfant (mĂȘme si je sais que c'est
loin d'ĂȘtre bien), mais pour l'homme c'est un vĂ©ritable massacre , je n'arrive pas du tout Ă faire les yeux,
de 3/4. Si vous avez un ou deux conseils pour m'aiguiller cela serait top !
Merciiii d'avance !
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I wouldnât say itâs a disaster, but youâre missing a few key elements ^^
Indeed, you did a better job with the girl and the child. Iâll proceed in order:
The girl:
The eyes are well-placed, but I donât know why you added an outer line for the eyeball; the eyelashes at the outer corner of the eye are enough to close the eye ^^ And if you want the edge of the eye to be the eyeball, then your eyelashes should be attached to it. But even if your eyes are well-placed, they are too close together; remember, you should be able to place an eye between them, and thatâs not the case here. The eyes are also generally very small for manga; if you look, they are roughly the same size as the mouth or nose, which are supposed to be much smaller. You also have the eyebrow marker, which indicates their position and shows you how small the eyes are on her face. For a more European style, this would be perfectly fine, but in manga, itâs too subtle :)
The boy:
Here, we have small eyes again, too close together, but they are also poorly placed. Iâve drawn the line of the face and indicated the reference points you can use to position your elements ^^
The child:
Itâs not bad; one eye is too close to the other (asymmetry, so if you imagine him facing us, his eyes wouldnât be symmetrical at all).
Be careful, you tend to create divergent gazes as well. Align your irises in the same direction; these things can make a difference of just a few millimeters ^^ You often have the eye closest to us looking at us and the other looking straight ahead. You need to decide where you want to direct the gaze ^^
Iâm attaching a correction to guide you :)
Je ne dirais pas que c'est la cata, mais il te manque quelques clés ^^
Effectivement, pour la fille et l'enfant tu t'en es mieux sorti. Je vais procéder dans l'ordre :
La fille :
Les yeux sont bien placĂ©s, mais je ne sais pas pourquoi tu m'as mis un trait extĂ©rieur pour le globe oculaire, les cils du coin externe de l'oeil suffisent pour fermer l'oeil ^^ Et si tu veux que le bord de l'oeil soit le globe, alors tes cils y sont accolĂ©s. Mais mĂȘme si tes yeux sont bien placĂ©s, ils sont trop proches, rappelle-toi : tu dois pouvoir placer un oeil entre eux, et ici ce n'est pas le cas. Les yeux sont aussi globalement trĂšs petit pour du manga, si tu regardes, ils sont sensiblement de la mĂȘme taille que la bouche ou le nez, censĂ©s ĂȘtre bien plus petit. Tu as aussi le repĂšre des sourcils qui t'indique leur positionnement et t'aurais montrĂ© Ă quel point les yeux sont touuuuut petits dans son visage. Pour un style plus europĂ©en, ce serait tout Ă faire correct, mais en manga, c'est trop timide :)
Le garçon :
Alors ici on a à nouveau des yeux trop petits, trop proches mais en plus ils sont mal placés. Je t'ai tracé la ligne du visage et t'ai indiqué les points de repÚre que tu peux utiliser pour positionner tes éléments ^^
L'enfant :
C'est pas mal, il a un Ćil trop proche de l'autre (asymĂ©trie, si tu l'imagines de face, ses yeux ne seraient pas du tout symĂ©triques).
Attention, tu as tendance Ă faire des regards divergents aussi. Aligne bien tes iris dans la mĂȘme direction, ça peut se jouer au millimĂštre ce genre de choses ^^ Tu as souvent l'oeil le plus proche de nous qui nous regarde et l'autre qui regarde droit devant le personnage. Il faut choisir oĂč tu veux diriger le regard du coup ^^
Je te joins une correction pour t'aiguiller :)
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Here is my work before it was corrected.
Voici mon travail avant la correction.
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03/10/2020
This is pretty good :D
The girl is perfect. The child is almost perfect too; you just made the eye a little too small (itâs reduced in width, but not in height).
For the boy, however, the placement isnât right, and the eye isnât âcut offâ at the edge of the face. Weâre kind of cheating to make sure itâs always included within the face.
Iâve attached a correction so you can see what I mean.
C'est pas mal tout ça :D
La fille est impeccable. L'enfant presque parfait aussi tu as juste trop réduit l'oeil (il se réduit en largeur, mais pas en hauteur).
Pour le garçon par contre, le placement n'est pas bon, et l'oeil n'est pas "coupé" au bord du visage. On triche un peu pour qu'il soit toujours inclu dans le visage.
Je t'ai joint une correction pour que tu visualises ^^
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04/10/2020
thank you for the correction.
merci pour la correction.
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Here is my work.
Voici mon travail.
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11/10/2020
I think you posted this in the wrong thread, but Iâll correct it.
The nose is actually quite good. You did a good job with the 3/4 view and the profile. The nose starts a bit too low for a man (the indentation at the top of the nose should start at eye level, or even above).
However, when viewed head-on, your nose is as wide as it is in the 3/4 view or the profile, which is strange. You would almost have to flatten it a bit to make it more vertical.
But overall, itâs really not bad, well done!
Tu t'es trompé de sujet je crois mais je te corrige ^^
Le nez est plutĂŽt pas mal, tu t'en sors bien de 3/4 et pas mal de profil (le nez commence trop bas pour l'homme (le creux du haut du nez commence au niveau des yeux, voir au-dessus)).
De face par contre ton nez est aussi large que de 3/4 ou de profil, ce qui est Ă©trange. Il faudrait presque l'Ă©craser un peu pour qu'il soit plus vertical.
Mais c'est vraiment pas mal en tout cas, bravo :)
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