Characters 5 clothes

Hello Malynka!

Yes, I understand. I've improved a few details. I removed some unnecessary folds on the arms, concentrating the folds at the points of inflection, or where the fabric "bunches up" and compresses (wrists). Since the dress is long, there may be some compression folds on the ground. Also, it's good to think about adding bulges on the outside of the shapes, not just lines of folds on the inside. It was somewhat done already, but I've improved it. In any case, the placement of the folds is generally well done!

I'm just adding that, to better show that the character is sitting and doesn't just have legs that are too short, I've added the volume of the thighs that extends to the sides. ^^

It was only after reflecting on it that I realized that there was a lack of volume, making it unclear whether he was sitting or lying down.

Thank you for these corrections!

You’re welcome 😀 It’s good to observe things for yourself; that’s how you sharpen your perception!

Hello Urbantuner89!

Great work! It’s quite well done! I’ve lightened it up a bit and better followed the volumes for the skirt. At the bottom, I’ve added more detail to the drapes, which weren’t very visible, to better create the folds, just like on the dress in the model. It’s important to keep in mind how the fabric pieces pass behind. For the top, don’t forget the bulges that show the volume of the fabric; it’s not enough to just draw lines on the inside. The placement of the folds was well done. Well played :)

Hello Marionblush!

Oops, I missed your post, but I hope you’ll still see the answer. Everything is working very well! As for the folds, some of them are unnecessary, as they aren’t really related to an inflection point. I’ll adjust it on the drawing:

Hello YAKAENRIRE!

Great work! It’s well understood, but there are a few too many folds in places where the points of inflection don’t create that much tension. It’s also good to consider the stiffness of the material; a suit won’t fold as much as a silk t-shirt, for example, due to its thickness and weight, which smooths things out a bit. I’ve painted over the drawings. It might also be interesting to see your references if you have any. The small exercise in the corner is understood otherwise :)

For women, it’s actually quite good! I just changed the direction of the pleats depending on how the bust turns, and therefore where the fabric gathers.

That’s fine, let’s keep it simple and move in the right direction, Yapluka ;)

Thanks, Nayala, your corrections are always excellent!

Well summarized! You’re welcome 😁

Hello Le PigeonVoyageur19. I really like the style of your characters, and you’ve dressed them well; the folds in the clothing are nicely done. However, pay attention to the anatomy and proportions of your characters.

Same issue, pay attention to the proportions. I think you went a bit overboard with the folds; you could lighten the quantity and only place the most important folds.

Hi Ciou, your characters are really stylish, I like them a lot! Just be careful with the hands, as they aren’t always drawn correctly and can sometimes be difficult to see. It’s a shame, considering the amount of detail you’ve put into each character!

There’s also a slight issue with the proportions of the girl with glasses; the lower part of her body (her legs) appears too long in relation to the upper part. It might be a stylistic choice, but keep an eye on it. Remember that the upper part of the body – from the head to the pubic area – should be roughly equal in length to the lower part – from the pubic area to the feet.

Great work!