Your work is very good, I approve đ For the robot, you just need to pay attention to the base, especially in the front view, itâs a little too thick! But apart from that, itâs all good đđ
You did well to post on the forum to get feedback, Iâm sorry, but I probably didnât notice that I hadnât reviewed your drawings. Again, I apologize đ If this happens again, donât hesitate to send a message directly on the chat đ
Now, regarding the feedback (Hooray, finally đ) Your cleaning robot isnât that bad, I just see a few minor issues with the side view. Indeed, we canât see the difference in size and width between the two cylinders, nor the element that goes over them!
For the ladybug, its body is too round and its head looks like itâs just placed on top of it. Take another good look at the reference before moving on to the drawing stage; there are quite a few elements missing, especially regarding the legs!
The car is quite good! The side and aerial views are good, thatâs cool! đ For the front view, itâs a bit tricky; the wheels are too small, and it also looks a bit squashed. But apart from that, itâs good!
I advise you to rework the ladybug, from all angles, and observe the reference carefully đ Donât hesitate to send it back to me when youâre finished; this time, Iâll respond more quickly đ (otherwise, donât hesitate to come and talk about it on the chat đ) See you soon, keep it up, youâre on the right track đ
Excellent work! For me, itâs a success. You understood the exercise very well, well done! Just be aware that the top view of the car is a bit too rectangular đ. But aside from this minor issue, itâs very good! Keep it up đ
The profile and top views are very good! Compared to the front view, you had a small issue: you completely forgot the base on which the cylinders are placed!
Apart from that, itâs very good; you understood the exercise well, so you can move on to the next object! đ
A little tip: try to take more time when you draw. Here, youâre missing a lot of details, like the legs, mandibles, etc., and your lines look very rushed! Take your time, and your work will be more accurate and cleaner! You really need to observe how the insect is structured. In this drawing, from a 3/4 angle and a front view, youâve given it a neck thatâs a little too prominent. The view from above and behind is good; Iâll just leave it to you to add the details I mentioned!
Iâll let you rework these elements đ See you soon, keep going â there are some good ideas here!
Hey! Thanks, Jarod!
I spent a lot of time on it (maybe too much!). I need to improve my âefficiencyâ⊠or maybe just lower my expectations a bit :p
Looking forward to seeing your drawings!
Overall, I believe that perfectionists and those who pay close attention to detail have a problem with âefficiencyâ (and I am one of them).
For some time now, Iâve been setting myself this strange goal of working faster or, at least, focusing more on the essentials. So, I wonât hide the fact that Iâve made some mistakes along the way, but overall, Iâve realized that this attention to detail can also be part of your unique style as an artist, and it needs time to express itself. It will give your drawings personality in the future; itâs just that you shouldnât get lost in the details, but otherwise, I think weâre allowed to take all the time we need to achieve a personal vision.
Iâll leave it to our dear teachers to correct me if Iâm wrong in offering you this reflection (which has also become somewhat personal over time đ).
As Jarod said, your car looks great đ For me, itâs perfect; itâs really good work, I approve! I just think the front of the car could be a bit longer, but otherwise, itâs really good! đđ
Hello Dorian56!
Comme l'a dit Jarod, ta voiture est classe đ Pour moi c'est tout bon, c'est du bon travail je valide! Je pense juste que l'avant de la voiture devrait ĂȘtre plus long, mais sinon c'est vraiment pas mal !đđ
Thank you for your feedback đ.
@ Jarod: Yes, for some people, itâs âdifficultâ to keep things âsimple,â but Iâll have to do it anyway, otherwise Iâll lose my passion for drawing⊠In any case, Iâll definitely remember what you said about the artistâs signature đ.
@ Nora: Yep! I noticed it, but it was too late to fix it (or rather, I was too lazy ^^).
Itâs nice to see that my hours of work werenât in vain! Your advice is really motivating đ.
Okay, back to work now đ.
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Your work is very good, I approve đ For the robot, you just need to pay attention to the base, especially in the front view, itâs a little too thick! But apart from that, itâs all good đđ
Ton travail est trĂšs bon, je valide đ Pour le robot il faut juste que tu fasses attention au socle, surtout sur la vue de face, il est un peu trop Ă©pais! Mais mise Ă part ça c'est tout bon đđ
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Here is the corrected version of my ladybug, shown from the front.
Have a nice evening đ
Voici ma coccinelle de face corrigée.
Belle soirĂ©e đ
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So, Iâm going to re-upload the photos one by one so they appear larger. Here is the first item.
Du coup je remets les photos une par une pour qu'elles soient plus grandes. Voici le premier objet
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Thank you for your comments đ
Merci pour vos remarques đ
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You did well to post on the forum to get feedback, Iâm sorry, but I probably didnât notice that I hadnât reviewed your drawings. Again, I apologize đ If this happens again, donât hesitate to send a message directly on the chat đ
Now, regarding the feedback (Hooray, finally đ) Your cleaning robot isnât that bad, I just see a few minor issues with the side view. Indeed, we canât see the difference in size and width between the two cylinders, nor the element that goes over them!
For the ladybug, its body is too round and its head looks like itâs just placed on top of it. Take another good look at the reference before moving on to the drawing stage; there are quite a few elements missing, especially regarding the legs!
The car is quite good! The side and aerial views are good, thatâs cool! đ For the front view, itâs a bit tricky; the wheels are too small, and it also looks a bit squashed. But apart from that, itâs good!
I advise you to rework the ladybug, from all angles, and observe the reference carefully đ Donât hesitate to send it back to me when youâre finished; this time, Iâll respond more quickly đ (otherwise, donât hesitate to come and talk about it on the chat đ) See you soon, keep it up, youâre on the right track đ
Tu as bien fait de poster sur le forum pour avoir la correction, je suis dĂ©solĂ©e mais je n'ai sĂ»rement pas remarquĂ© que je n'avais pas corrigĂ© tes dessins. encore une fois dĂ©solĂ©e đ Si cela se reproduit n'hĂ©site pas Ă envoyer un message sur le tchat directement đ
Maintenant concernant la correction (Youpi enfiiiin đ) Ton robot mĂ©nager est pas si mal que ça, je vois juste quelques petits soucis pour la vue de profil, effectivement on ne voit pas la diffĂ©rence de taille et de largeur entre les deux cylindres, ni l'Ă©lĂ©ment qui passe aux dessus de ceux-ci!
Pour la coccinelle, son corps est un trop rond et sa tĂȘte est comme posĂ©e sur celui-ci, re-observe bien la rĂ©fĂ©rence avant de passer Ă l'Ă©tape du dessin, il y a pas mal d'Ă©lĂ©ments qui manque notamment au niveau des pattes!
La voiture est pas mal du tout! La vue de profil et aĂ©rienne sont biens, c'est cool! đ Pour la vue de face ça coince un petit peu, les roues sont trop petites, elle a aussi l'air assez tassĂ©e.. Mais mise Ă part cela, c'est bien!
Je te conseille de bien reprendre la coccinelle, sous tous ses angles, observe bien la rĂ©fĂ©rence đ N'hĂ©site pas Ă me la renvoyer quand tu auras terminĂ©, cette fois-ci je rĂ©pondrai plus vite đ (sinon n'hĂ©sites pas Ă venir en parler sur le tchat đ) Ă trĂšs bientĂŽt, continue comme ça, tu es sur la bonne voie đ
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Here are my exercises :)
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VoilĂ mes exercices :)
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Excellent work! For me, itâs a success. You understood the exercise very well, well done! Just be aware that the top view of the car is a bit too rectangular đ. But aside from this minor issue, itâs very good! Keep it up đ
Super bon travail, pour moi c'est validĂ©, tu as trĂšs bien compris l'exercice, bravo! Attention pour la voiture Ă la vue de dessus qui est un peu trop rectangulaire đ
Mais mise Ă part ce petit hic c'est trĂšs bon! Continue comme ça đ
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The profile and top views are very good! Compared to the front view, you had a small issue: you completely forgot the base on which the cylinders are placed!
Apart from that, itâs very good; you understood the exercise well, so you can move on to the next object! đ
La vue de profil et d'en haut sont trÚs biens! Par rapport à la vue de face tu as eu un petit souci, tu as complÚtement oublié le socle sur lequel sont posé les cylindres!
Mise Ă part cela c'est trĂšs bien, tu as bien compris l'exercice, tu peux passer Ă l'objet suivant! đ
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A little tip: try to take more time when you draw. Here, youâre missing a lot of details, like the legs, mandibles, etc., and your lines look very rushed! Take your time, and your work will be more accurate and cleaner! You really need to observe how the insect is structured. In this drawing, from a 3/4 angle and a front view, youâve given it a neck thatâs a little too prominent. The view from above and behind is good; Iâll just leave it to you to add the details I mentioned!
Iâll let you rework these elements đ See you soon, keep going â there are some good ideas here!
Petit conseil, essaie de prendre plus de temps lorsque tu dessines, ici tu oublies beaucoup de détails, comme les pattes, les mandibules etc et ton trait a l'air trÚs rapide! Prends plus ton temps, ton travail sera plus juste et propre! Il faut bien que tu observes comment est construit l'insecte, ici sur la vue de 3/4 et de face tu lui fais un cou un poil trop imposant, la vue d'en haut et de derriÚre est pas mal, je te laisse juste rajouter les détails dont j'ai parlé!
Je te laisse reprendre ces Ă©lĂ©ments đ Ă bientĂŽt, continue comme ça il y a de bonnes idĂ©es!
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Here's my car đ
Voici ma voiture đ
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I spent a lot of time on it (maybe too much!). I need to improve my âefficiencyâ⊠or maybe just lower my expectations a bit :p
Looking forward to seeing your drawings!
J'y ai passĂ© du temps dessus (trop mĂȘme) ! Il faut que j'amĂ©liore mon "rendement"... ou peut ĂȘtre baisser tout simplement mon niveau d'exigence :p
Au plaisir de voir tes dessins đ
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For some time now, Iâve been setting myself this strange goal of working faster or, at least, focusing more on the essentials. So, I wonât hide the fact that Iâve made some mistakes along the way, but overall, Iâve realized that this attention to detail can also be part of your unique style as an artist, and it needs time to express itself. It will give your drawings personality in the future; itâs just that you shouldnât get lost in the details, but otherwise, I think weâre allowed to take all the time we need to achieve a personal vision.
Iâll leave it to our dear teachers to correct me if Iâm wrong in offering you this reflection (which has also become somewhat personal over time đ).
Et cela fait un moment que je me posais cet objectif bizarre d'aller plus vite ou en tout cas plus Ă l'essentiel.
Alors je ne te cache pas que j'ai fait des beaux ratĂ©s, mais dans l'ensemble je me suis aperçu que cette finesse du dĂ©tail peut aussi faire parti de ta signature de dessinateur et qu'il faut lui laisser le temps de s'exprimer. Ăa donnera demain de la personnalitĂ© Ă tes dessins, c'est juste qu'il ne faut pas se perdre dans les dĂ©tails mais hors mis ça je crois qu'on a le droit de passer tout le temps qu'il faut pour obtenir une vision personnelle.
Je laisse le soin Ă nos chers profs de rebondir si je me trompe en te proposant cette rĂ©flexion (devenue Ă la longue Ă©galement personnelle đ)
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As Jarod said, your car looks great đ For me, itâs perfect; itâs really good work, I approve! I just think the front of the car could be a bit longer, but otherwise, itâs really good! đđ
Comme l'a dit Jarod, ta voiture est classe đ Pour moi c'est tout bon, c'est du bon travail je valide! Je pense juste que l'avant de la voiture devrait ĂȘtre plus long, mais sinon c'est vraiment pas mal !đđ
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@ Jarod: Yes, for some people, itâs âdifficultâ to keep things âsimple,â but Iâll have to do it anyway, otherwise Iâll lose my passion for drawing⊠In any case, Iâll definitely remember what you said about the artistâs signature đ.
@ Nora: Yep! I noticed it, but it was too late to fix it (or rather, I was too lazy ^^).
Itâs nice to see that my hours of work werenât in vain! Your advice is really motivating đ.
Okay, back to work now đ.
@ Jarod: Oui, pour certaines personnes, c'est "dur" de faire "simple" mais il va falloir le faire quand mĂȘme sinon je vais perdre gout au dessin... En tout cas, je retiens bien ce que tu a dis a propos de la signature du dessinateur đ.
@ Nora: Ouaip ! Je l'avais remarqué, mais trop tard pour le corriger (ou plutÎt la flemme ^^)
Ăa fait plaisir de voir que je n'ai pas perdu ces heures de boulot ! Du coup, vos conseils me boostent đ
Aller, au boulot maintenant đ.