Good evening, here is my version of the exercises. I had the opportunity to test a graphics tablet (it was my first time) for the ladybug and the car, so I took advantage of it.
This is pretty good! I just see a few minor errors here and there, so Iâm going to correct them đ
Letâs start with the household robot: you just missed a small detail, namely that the first cylinder is thicker and wider than the second. In your drawing, it looks like they have the same circumference! You also need to pay attention to the 3/4 view; the tops of both cylinders need to be consistent â they need to be on the same plane, which means they need to be parallel (even though they are not the same size). But apart from that, itâs very good!
Now letâs move on to the ladybug: Itâs really quite good! In my opinion, you should have made the head a tiny bit smaller in the profile view!
For the car, thereâs nothing to criticize; itâs really well done! You seem to be quite good at using the graphics tablet, which is great!
Keep it up! For me, itâs approved; you can move on to the next exercise! See you soon đ
Hello Cibath đ
C'est pas mal tout ça! Je vois juste quelques erreurs par-ci par-lĂ alors je vais te les corriger đ
Hello, after the ladybug, then the robot, here comes the car... I imagine there are plenty of things to improve. Can I move on to the next lesson, or do I still need to work on this topic thoroughly? :-)
There are a lot of good ideas! For me, the robot is great, itâs well done! đ
The only thing thatâs a little off is the ladybug. The part of its neck and head, from all viewing angles, is too large! Take a good look at the reference and observe the body/neck+head ratio carefully! Feel free to rework the ladybug. Otherwise, the legs are perfectly fine!
Donât hesitate to send me your corrected version! đ See you soon!
Thatâs good, I think your work is really good đ You just need to pay attention to a few small details!
Letâs start with the cleaning robot: itâs really not bad, but we canât see enough of the difference in diameter between the two cylinders; the first one should be larger than the second! Apart from that, you also forgot that, in the aerial view, the front view, and also the one in the center of your sheet, the beginning of the base was visible!
Now letâs move on to the ladybug: I think itâs successful! I think that for the aerial view, its body looks a little too round, and therefore its neck seems more âplacedâ than âconnectedâ to its body! For the front view, you should have made its body slightly more rounded! Otherwise, everything else is very good!
Keep it up! You can move on to the next object! đ
This is excellent work, well done! The household robot is perfect! The ladybug is also very good, just be careful with the side view; its body is just a tiny bit too long and, above all, too flat! But apart from that small detail, it's very good! You can move on to the car now đ
Thatâs not bad at all! Just pay attention to the side view; your two wheels arenât the same size đ but other than that, itâs very good. You can move on to the next exercise đ See you soon, and keep up the good work!
Bonjour Clochette!
C'est pas mal du tout! Fais juste attention pour la vue de profil, tes deux roues ne sont pas de la mĂȘme taille đ mais mise Ă part cela c'est trĂšs bien, tu peux passer au prochain exercice đ Ă bientĂŽt et continue comme ça!
Hello, hereâs the drawing of the machine (robot? What is it? Itâs hard to draw without knowing).
I look forward to your comments:), thank you in advance, and I look forward to reading them.
Bonjour voici le dessin de la machine (robot? qu'est ce que c'est? c'est dur de dessiner sans savoir)
j'attends vos commentaires avec impatience :), merci par avance et au plaisir de vous lire
For the household robot, itâs all good; youâve understood very well how the object is constructed!
The ladybug is also pretty good, but you seem to have had a few small issues with the legs... you almost turned it into a spider đ! In the front view, they point upwards, when they shouldnât! In the top view, they arenât that bad, except that theyâre a bit too long đ But otherwise, everything is good! Just fix that little issue đđ
Now for the car: I think itâs great! Just pay attention to the aerial view; youâve made it a little too slender here!
Keep up the good work! Feel free to send me your ladybug again once youâve corrected it, and donât forget to carefully observe the reference! đ See you soon!
Hi Nora, thank you for your advice. You were right, I hadn't quite identified what was wrong with the ladybug. I've made the corrections; could you take a look and let me know if it's okay? Thanks in advance!
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This is pretty good! I just see a few minor errors here and there, so Iâm going to correct them đ
Letâs start with the household robot: you just missed a small detail, namely that the first cylinder is thicker and wider than the second. In your drawing, it looks like they have the same circumference! You also need to pay attention to the 3/4 view; the tops of both cylinders need to be consistent â they need to be on the same plane, which means they need to be parallel (even though they are not the same size). But apart from that, itâs very good!
Now letâs move on to the ladybug: Itâs really quite good! In my opinion, you should have made the head a tiny bit smaller in the profile view!
For the car, thereâs nothing to criticize; itâs really well done! You seem to be quite good at using the graphics tablet, which is great!
Keep it up! For me, itâs approved; you can move on to the next exercise! See you soon đ
C'est pas mal tout ça! Je vois juste quelques erreurs par-ci par-lĂ alors je vais te les corriger đ
Commençons par le robot mĂ©nager : tu as juste omis un petit dĂ©tail, celui que le 1er cylindre est plus Ă©pais, plus large que le 2Ăšme, sur ton dessin on dirait qu'ils ont la mĂȘme circonfĂ©rence! Il faut aussi que tu fasses attention sur la vue de 3/4 il faut que les deux sommets de ces cylindres soient cohĂ©rents, il faut qu'ils soient sur le mĂȘme plan, c'est-Ă -dire qu'ils soient parallĂšles (bien qu'ils ne fassent pas la mĂȘme taille), mais mise Ă part cela c'est trĂšs bien!
Passon Ă la coccinelle : Elle est vraiment pas mal du tout! Selon moi sur la vue de profil tu aurais du faire la tĂȘte un poiiiiil plus petite!
Pour la voiture, rien Ă redire, c'est vraiment bien! Tu as l'air de bien maĂźtriser la tablette graphique c'est cool!
Continue comme ça! Pour moi c'est validĂ© tu peux passer au prochain exercice! Ă bientĂŽt đ
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Here is the robot and the ladybug.
Iâm going to make the car.
Voici le robot et la coccinelle.
je vais faire la voiture.
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There are a lot of good ideas! For me, the robot is great, itâs well done! đ
The only thing thatâs a little off is the ladybug. The part of its neck and head, from all viewing angles, is too large! Take a good look at the reference and observe the body/neck+head ratio carefully! Feel free to rework the ladybug. Otherwise, the legs are perfectly fine!
Donât hesitate to send me your corrected version! đ See you soon!
Y a pas mal de bonnes idĂ©es! Pour moi le robot c'est tout bon, il est bien rĂ©alisĂ©! đ
LĂ oĂč ça coince un petit peu c'est pour la coccinelle, la partie de son cou+tĂȘte sous tous les angles de vues est trop grande! Regarde bien la rĂ©fĂ©rence et observe bien le ratio corps / cou+tĂȘte! Je te laisse bien reprendre la coccinelle! Sinon par rapport Ă ses pattes c'est tout juste!
N'hĂ©site pas Ă me renvoyer ta correction! đ Ă bientĂŽt!
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Iâm brand new to the site and a complete beginner. Iâve watched the first four videos, and Iâve already learned so much! Thank you!
Hereâs my first sketch of the robot; if you could give me your feedback now, that would be great before I move on to the next stage.
Thank you in advance.
Chloé
Je suis toute nouvelle sur le site et complÚtement débutante. J'ai regardé les 4 premiÚres vidéos, et j'ai déjà appris énormément de choses! Merci !
Voici mon premier croquis du robot si vous pouvez déjà me donner votre avis avant que j'attaque la suite.
Merci d'avance.
Chloé
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Here is my ladybug. Thank you in advance for your feedback.
Chloé
Voici ma coccinnelle. Merci d'avance pour le retour.
Chloé
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Thatâs good, I think your work is really good đ You just need to pay attention to a few small details!
Letâs start with the cleaning robot: itâs really not bad, but we canât see enough of the difference in diameter between the two cylinders; the first one should be larger than the second! Apart from that, you also forgot that, in the aerial view, the front view, and also the one in the center of your sheet, the beginning of the base was visible!
Now letâs move on to the ladybug: I think itâs successful! I think that for the aerial view, its body looks a little too round, and therefore its neck seems more âplacedâ than âconnectedâ to its body! For the front view, you should have made its body slightly more rounded! Otherwise, everything else is very good!
Keep it up! You can move on to the next object! đ
C'est bien, pour moi ton travail est vraiment bon đ Il faut juste que tu fasses attention Ă quelques petits dĂ©tails!
Commençons par le robot mĂ©nager : il est vraiment pas mal, mais on ne voit pas assez la diffĂ©rence de diamĂštre entre les deux cylindres, le premier devant ĂȘtre plus gros que le second! Mise Ă part cela tu as aussi oubliĂ© que, sur la vue aĂ©rienne, la vue de face et aussi celle au centre de ta feuille, le dĂ©but du socle Ă©tait visible!
Passons à la coccinelle : je la trouve réussie! Je pense que pour la vue aérienne, son corps paraßt un peu trop rond, et donc que son cou est plus "posé" que "relié" à son corps! Pour la vue de face, tu aurais du faire son corps légÚrement plus bombé! Sinon le reste c'est trÚs bien!
Continue comme ça! Tu peux passer Ă l'objet suivant! đ
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Here is my study on household appliances.
Voici mon étude pour l'électroménager.
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Thank you in advance for your feedback!
Merci d'avance pour les retours !
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This is excellent work, well done! The household robot is perfect! The ladybug is also very good, just be careful with the side view; its body is just a tiny bit too long and, above all, too flat! But apart from that small detail, it's very good! You can move on to the car now đ
C'est du trĂšs bon travail, bravo! Pour le robot mĂ©nager c'est tout bon! La coccinelle est elle aussi trĂšs bien, fais juste attention sur la vue de profil son corps est un touuuuut petit peu trop long mais surtout trop aplati! Mais mise Ă part ce petit couac c'est trĂšs bien! Tu peux passer Ă la voiture đ
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Here is my car.
I look forward to hearing your feedback.
Chloé
Voici ma voiture.
Au plaisir d'avoir vos commentaires.
Chloé
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Thatâs not bad at all! Just pay attention to the side view; your two wheels arenât the same size đ but other than that, itâs very good. You can move on to the next exercise đ See you soon, and keep up the good work!
C'est pas mal du tout! Fais juste attention pour la vue de profil, tes deux roues ne sont pas de la mĂȘme taille đ mais mise Ă part cela c'est trĂšs bien, tu peux passer au prochain exercice đ Ă bientĂŽt et continue comme ça!
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I look forward to your comments:), thank you in advance, and I look forward to reading them.
j'attends vos commentaires avec impatience :), merci par avance et au plaisir de vous lire
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These are some very good ideas!
For the household robot, itâs all good; youâve understood very well how the object is constructed!
The ladybug is also pretty good, but you seem to have had a few small issues with the legs... you almost turned it into a spider đ! In the front view, they point upwards, when they shouldnât! In the top view, they arenât that bad, except that theyâre a bit too long đ But otherwise, everything is good! Just fix that little issue đđ
Now for the car: I think itâs great! Just pay attention to the aerial view; youâve made it a little too slender here!
Keep up the good work! Feel free to send me your ladybug again once youâve corrected it, and donât forget to carefully observe the reference! đ See you soon!
Il y a de trÚs bonnes idées!
Pour le robot ménager c'est tout bon, tu as trÚs bien compris comment l'objet était construit!
La coccinelle est elle aussi pas mal, mais tu as eu quelques petits soucis avec les pattes apparemment... tu l'as presque transformĂ©e en araignĂ©e đ! sur la vue de face, elles remontent, alors qu'elles ne sont pas supposĂ©es! Pour la vue d'en haut, elles ne sont pas si mal que ça, si ce n'est trop allongĂ©es đ Mais sinon pour le reste c'est tout bon! Je te laisse juste corriger ce petit souci đđ
Maintenant la voiture : je la trouve top! Fais juste attention à la vue aérienne, ici tu l'as légÚrement trop affinée!
Continue comme ça, c'est du bon travail! N'hĂ©site pas Ă me renvoyer ta coccinelle lorsque tu l'auras corrigĂ©e, et n'oublie pas de bien observer la rĂ©fĂ©rence! đ Ă bientĂŽt!
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effectivement je ne mettais pas le doigts sur ce qui n'allait pas sur la coccinelle :) voici rectifiĂ©e si tu peux me dire si c'est ok? merci par avance :)đ
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Thatâs better! đ You can move on to the next exercise now đ See you soon, and keep up the good work!
C'est mieux! đ Tu peux passer au prochain exercice đ Ă trĂšs bientĂŽt, et continue comme ça!