There are some good ideas here, but you had a few minor issues with some of the perspectives, so Iâm going to correct them for you! đ The 3/4 view is really quite good, especially in "suite 1"; there are no corrections needed there đ! For your sketch 1 in "suite," you have a few small problems; it seems like you didn't quite understand how the object was constructed. You gave it a kind of double base, so I suggest you redo this view, and especially pay close attention to the reference image đ.
For "suite 2," it's not bad! You just need to pay attention to your lines; you're using a lot of very small lines, which makes your work look a little messy đ. Try to make the lines more visible and straighter; that will significantly improve your work! For "suite 3," it's good. Again, be sure to make the lines straight!
For your drawings in "suite 4," there are a few minor issues. First, for the one on the right, the problem is at the bottom of the cleaning robot. You forgot to draw the base on which the cylinders are placed! In relation to these cylinders, they need to be perpendicular, but in your drawing, they're slightly off to the side! But apart from that, the idea is good đ. For the second drawing, you've spaced the first cylinder at the beginning of the shape a little too far, but otherwise, it's good. However, there's still the same issue with the somewhat rough lines đ.
I suggest you redo the view that gave you the most trouble, which is the one you did in "suite," taking into account the comments I made, especially regarding your lines đ.
Keep going like this; it's not bad at all. There are very good ideas, and your approach is good and is bearing fruit! đ Don't hesitate to send me your drawing again once you've corrected everything; I'll be happy to comment on it! đ See you soon! đ
Your work is really quite good, there are some very good ideas!
For the cleaning robot, you have very clearly understood how the object is constructed, which is great, and itâs perfect for me đ
For the ladybug, itâs also quite good here, you just need to pay attention to the 3/4 view. Here, youâve made the ladybug very flat; you should have made it more rounded. It almost looks like a bedbug! But the other views are good!
And finally, for the car! Indeed, itâs not the easiest object to draw, Iâll grant you that đ, but you did a very good job! For the 3/4 view, the wheels should be a little bit bigger; they are a bit too small here, which gives the impression that the car is quite low. And to finish, the front view, which I think is successful! You just had a small issue: itâs leaning to the left, and the wheels are also a little too small here! đ But apart from that, itâs not bad at all! đ
For me, you can move on to the next exercise; you have understood this one well, and itâs very good work! đ Keep it up, and see you soon! đđ
Pour moi tu peux passer au prochain exercice, tu as bien compris celui-ci, c'est du trĂšs bon travail! đ Continue comme ça, et Ă bientĂŽt! đđ
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There are some good ideas here, but you had a few minor issues with some of the perspectives, so Iâm going to correct them for you! đ The 3/4 view is really quite good, especially in "suite 1"; there are no corrections needed there đ! For your sketch 1 in "suite," you have a few small problems; it seems like you didn't quite understand how the object was constructed. You gave it a kind of double base, so I suggest you redo this view, and especially pay close attention to the reference image đ.
For "suite 2," it's not bad! You just need to pay attention to your lines; you're using a lot of very small lines, which makes your work look a little messy đ. Try to make the lines more visible and straighter; that will significantly improve your work! For "suite 3," it's good. Again, be sure to make the lines straight!
For your drawings in "suite 4," there are a few minor issues. First, for the one on the right, the problem is at the bottom of the cleaning robot. You forgot to draw the base on which the cylinders are placed! In relation to these cylinders, they need to be perpendicular, but in your drawing, they're slightly off to the side! But apart from that, the idea is good đ. For the second drawing, you've spaced the first cylinder at the beginning of the shape a little too far, but otherwise, it's good. However, there's still the same issue with the somewhat rough lines đ.
I suggest you redo the view that gave you the most trouble, which is the one you did in "suite," taking into account the comments I made, especially regarding your lines đ.
Keep going like this; it's not bad at all. There are very good ideas, and your approach is good and is bearing fruit! đ Don't hesitate to send me your drawing again once you've corrected everything; I'll be happy to comment on it! đ See you soon! đ
Il y a de bonnes idĂ©es, mais tu as eu quelques petits soucis avec certains angles de vue alors je vais te corriger tout ça! đ La vue de 3/4 est vraiment pas mal du tout, surtout sur "suite 1",il n'y a pas de corrections Ă faire đ! Pour ton croquis 1 dans "suite", tu as quelques petits soucis, on dirait que tu n'as pas trĂšs bien compris comment l'objet Ă©tait construit, tu lui as fait une sorte de double socle, je t'invite donc Ă reprendre cette vue-ci, et surtout de bien observer la rĂ©fĂ©rence đ
Pour "suite 2" c'est pas mal! Il faut juste que tu fasses attention Ă tes traits, tu en fais pleins de tous petits, ce qui rend ton travail un petit peu brouillon đ essaie de faire des traits plus visibles, plus droits, ça amĂ©liorera nettement ton travail! Pour "suite 3" c'est bien, ici encore fais bien attention Ă faire des traits bien droits!
Pour tes dessins de "suite 4" il y a quelques petits trucs qui cloche, d'abord pour celui Ă droite, lĂ oĂč ça coince c'est au niveau du bas du robot mĂ©nager, tu as oubliĂ© de faire le socle sur lequel sont posĂ©s les cylindres! Par rapport Ă ces cylindres il faut bien qu'ils soient perpendiculaires, sur ton dessin ils partent un peu de cĂŽtĂ©! Mais mise Ă part cela l'idĂ©e est bonne đ Pour le seconde dessin tu as un poil trop espacĂ© le 1er cylindre du dĂ©but de la forme, mais sinon c'est bien, cependant il y a toujours ce mĂȘme souci avec le trait un peu grossier đ
Je t'invite donc Ă refaire la vue qui t'as posĂ© le plus problĂšme, donc celle que tu as fait en "suite" en prenant bien en compte les remarques que je t'ai fait, notamment par rapport Ă ton tracĂ© đ
Continue comme cela, c'est pas mal du tout, il y a de trĂšs bonnes idĂ©es et ta recherche est bonne et porte ses fruits! đ N'hĂ©site pas Ă me renvoyer ton dessin une fois que tu auras corrigĂ© tout cela, je te le commenterai volontiers ! đ Ă bientĂŽt! đ
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I am sending you my drawings of the household robot, the ladybug, and the car so you can give me your opinion.
The car was the most difficult to draw.
Thank you,
Flo
Je vous joints mes dessins du robot ménager, de la coccinelle et de la voiture pour avoir votre avis.
La voiture a été la plus compliquée à dessiner.
Je vous remercie,
Flo
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Your work is really quite good, there are some very good ideas!
For the cleaning robot, you have very clearly understood how the object is constructed, which is great, and itâs perfect for me đ
For the ladybug, itâs also quite good here, you just need to pay attention to the 3/4 view. Here, youâve made the ladybug very flat; you should have made it more rounded. It almost looks like a bedbug! But the other views are good!
And finally, for the car! Indeed, itâs not the easiest object to draw, Iâll grant you that đ, but you did a very good job! For the 3/4 view, the wheels should be a little bit bigger; they are a bit too small here, which gives the impression that the car is quite low. And to finish, the front view, which I think is successful! You just had a small issue: itâs leaning to the left, and the wheels are also a little too small here! đ But apart from that, itâs not bad at all! đ
For me, you can move on to the next exercise; you have understood this one well, and itâs very good work! đ Keep it up, and see you soon! đđ
Ton travail est vraiment pas mal du tout, il y a de trÚs bonnes idées!
Pour le robot mĂ©nager, tu as trĂšs bien compris comment l'objet Ă©tait construit, c'est top, pour moi c'est tout bon đ
Pour la coccinelle, ici aussi c'est pas mal, il faut juste que tu fasses attention à la vue de 3/4, ici tu as rendu la coccinelle trÚs plate, tu aurais du la faire plus bombé, ici elle ressemble presque à une punaise! Mais pour le reste des vues c'est bien!
Et finalement pour la voiture! Effectivement ce n'est pas l'objet le plus facile Ă dessiner je te l'accorde đ mais tu t'en es trĂšs bien sorti! Pour la vue de 3/4, les roues devraient ĂȘtre un poil plus grandes, ici elles sont un petits peu petites, ce qui donne l'impression que la voiture est assez basse! Et pour terminer, la vue de face, que je trouve rĂ©ussie! Tu as juste eu un petit souci, elle tangue du cĂŽtĂ© gauche et les roues sont ici aussi un poil trop petites! đ Mais mise Ă part cela c'est pas mal du tout! đ
Pour moi tu peux passer au prochain exercice, tu as bien compris celui-ci, c'est du trĂšs bon travail! đ Continue comme ça, et Ă bientĂŽt! đđ