Oh, you've tackled quite a challenge by adding wind as well :D
Overall, I think you're doing well, you're placing the folds correctly, you've tested with rolled-up sleeves and everything. However, be careful to follow the volume of the body (for example, in exercise 2, on one side the skirt is glued to the body, while on the other there is a margin of several centimeters >> illogical). So yes, don't hesitate to think about the "geometric shape" on which you're placing your clothes. For the arms, they are cylinders, so they're rounded. Don't hesitate to look at yourself in a mirror in a similar position to see what it looks like if you're in doubt ^^
Otherwise, it's pretty good. The exercise with the wind was complex, because you have to add that the wind (quite strong moreover) you chose will add new deformations to the clothes. It's as if you're adding new tension zones to the clothes. Hence it's complicated to grasp. I've pointed out lots of little things to improve your drawing, including applying this to the hair as well.
But other than that, I confirm, you have generally grasped the principle well. You will naturally improve with practice đ
There are good things and others that do not work. The creases in the pants are very very strong (usually the creases are light so as not to attract too much attention) and they are misplaced. Those on the chest as well. You may have already seen the correction video, but I'm attaching a quick little touch-up ^^ Your second drawing wasn't sent though.
Hello Milpertui, normally to get a correction you need to post in the topics tagged "corrections" when there are any.
I'll make an exception this time, but you'll need to pay attention next time :)
Regarding your character, there are very few folds; some are missing at the pants level (at the crease of the thighs/pubic area). Otherwise, as these are garments that are relatively close to the body, on a character who is not performing any particular movement and is standing upright, not many folds are created. But the ones you have placed are good :)
Normally, you should have posted your drawing in the "Correction" section but it's not a big deal.
Just remember for next time ^^
If you can't find the way, it's: COMMUNITY --> FORUM --> MANGA --> the correction that corresponds to your exercise :)
So, your drawing is really not bad :)
You put a lot of effort into it and it shows
Let's take a closer look at this young lady ^^
Let's start from the top.
The folds on your lady's shirt are not pulled tightly enough, I think.
With tension and gravity, they should be more stretched downwards since her arms are lowered.
For the skirt, it's still a question of folds.
"Sailor-style" skirts have very specific, sharp, and straight folds.
In your drawing, you made the height between the skirt sections jagged. However, this doesn't work here. Fabric can't be folded and give that look.
Try folding a sheet of paper this way and you'll see that the spacing is very minimal or non-existent.
For the jacket, my major issue is with the knot.
A jacket around the hips is not the easiest to do and the best way to understand how it works is to look at photo references if you have any. (otherwise, take a photo of yourself in the outfit and pose as reference, thatâs what I often do ^^)
Don't hesitate to give thickness and volume to your clothes :)
Not all fabrics are thin like linen ^^
To finish with the socks.
This is a very personal opinion but I think that leg warmers do not work when they are high.
They are very thick socks with lots of material. Their own weight makes them fall to the shins or even ankles. so they really only work if they are low on the leg.
High socks in general are very tightly adhered to the leg precisely to prevent them from falling or sliding.
That's it! :)
Folds are really one of the most complex things to do when drawing clothes so don't get discouraged :)
It will come with time ^^
Bonjour Capucine !
Normalement c'est dans "Correction" que tu aurais dĂ» poster ton dessin mais ce n'est pas grave.
Pense y juste la prochaine fois ^^
Si tu ne trouves pas le chemin c'est : COMMUNAUTE --> FORUM --> MANGA --> la correction qui correspond a ton exercice :)
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12/05/2020
I tried to draw a character in the wind... đđ
J ai tentĂ© de dessiner un perso dans le vent... đđ
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25/05/2020
Oh, you've tackled quite a challenge by adding wind as well :D
Overall, I think you're doing well, you're placing the folds correctly, you've tested with rolled-up sleeves and everything. However, be careful to follow the volume of the body (for example, in exercise 2, on one side the skirt is glued to the body, while on the other there is a margin of several centimeters >> illogical). So yes, don't hesitate to think about the "geometric shape" on which you're placing your clothes. For the arms, they are cylinders, so they're rounded. Don't hesitate to look at yourself in a mirror in a similar position to see what it looks like if you're in doubt ^^
Otherwise, it's pretty good. The exercise with the wind was complex, because you have to add that the wind (quite strong moreover) you chose will add new deformations to the clothes. It's as if you're adding new tension zones to the clothes. Hence it's complicated to grasp. I've pointed out lots of little things to improve your drawing, including applying this to the hair as well.
But other than that, I confirm, you have generally grasped the principle well. You will naturally improve with practice đ
Oh tu t'es attaqué à un sacré problÚme en ajoutant du vent en plus :D
Globalement tu t'en sors bien je trouve, tu places bien les plus, tu as testĂ© avec des manches retroussĂ©es et tout. Attention par contre Ă bien suivre le volume du corps (par exemple, l'exo 2, d'un cĂŽtĂ© la jupe est collĂ©e au corps, de l'autre il y a une marge de plusieurs centimĂštres >> pas logique). Donc oui, n'hĂ©site pas Ă rĂ©flĂ©chir Ă la "forme gĂ©omĂ©trique" sur laquelle tu poses tes vĂȘtements. Pour les bras, ce sont des cylindres, donc arrondi. N'hĂ©site pas Ă te regarder dans une glace en te mettant dans un position similaire pour voir ce que ça fait si tu as un doute ^^
Autrement, c'est pas mal du tout. L'exercice avec le vent Ă©tait complexe, parce qu'il faut ajouter à ça que le vent (assez fort en plus) que tu as choisi va ajoute une nouvelle dĂ©formation aux vĂȘtements. C'est comme si tu rajoutais de nouvelles zones de tension aux vĂȘtements. Du coup c'est compliquĂ© Ă apprĂ©hender. Je t'ai indiquĂ© pleins de petite choses pour amĂ©liorer ton dessin, y compris en appliquant ça sur les cheveux aussi.
Mais Ă part ça, je te valide, tu as globalement bien saisi le principe. Tu t'amĂ©lioreras naturellement avec la pratique đ
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Here is my first complete manga. Could you please give me your opinion?
Thank you đ
Voici mon premier manga entier. Voulez-vous bien me donner votre avis, sâil vous plaĂźt?
Merciđ
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25/07/2020
It works very well :D
You could improve the flounces by not aligning them and making them a bit less regular. A bit like here: https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1QiFjQpXXXXbhXpXXq6xXFXXXr/Jupon-Sexy-Satin-Mini-Tutu-jupe-taille-lastique-robe-de-bal-volants-froufrous-Corset-jupes.jpg
Ăa marche trĂšs bien :D
Tu pourrais améliorer les volants en ne les alignant pas et en les faisant un poil moins réguliers. Un peu comme ici : https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1QiFjQpXXXXbhXpXXq6xXFXXXr/Jupon-Sexy-Satin-Mini-Tutu-jupe-taille-lastique-robe-de-bal-volants-froufrous-Corset-jupes.jpg
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Here are my drawings, a bit late...
Thank you in advance for your response :)
Bye!
Voici mes dessins avec un peu de retard...
Merci d'avance pour votre réponse :)
Bye !
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Aside from the creases at the front of the knee for men (they should be at the back, since that's where it bends), the rest works well :3
Hormis les plis Ă l'avant du genou pour l'homme (ils devraient ĂȘtre Ă l'arriĂšre, car c'est derriĂšre que ça se plie), le reste fonctionne bien :3
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There are good things and others that do not work. The creases in the pants are very very strong (usually the creases are light so as not to attract too much attention) and they are misplaced. Those on the chest as well. You may have already seen the correction video, but I'm attaching a quick little touch-up ^^ Your second drawing wasn't sent though.
Y a des bonnes choses et d'autres qui ne fonctionnent pas. Les plis du pantalons sont trĂšs trĂšs trĂšs forts (en gĂ©nĂ©ral les plis sont lĂ©gers pour ne pas trop attirer l'oeil) et ils sont mal placĂ©. Ceux sur la poitrine aussi. Tu as peut-ĂȘtre dĂ©jĂ vu la vidĂ©o correction, mais je te joins une petite retouches rapide ^^ Ton deuxiĂšme dessin n'a pas Ă©tĂ© envoyĂ© par contre.
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Thank you
Merci
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I'll make an exception this time, but you'll need to pay attention next time :)
Regarding your character, there are very few folds; some are missing at the pants level (at the crease of the thighs/pubic area). Otherwise, as these are garments that are relatively close to the body, on a character who is not performing any particular movement and is standing upright, not many folds are created. But the ones you have placed are good :)
Je fais exception pour cette fois, mais il faudra faire attention les fois suivantes :)
Concernant ton personnage, il y a trĂšs peu de plis, il en manque au niveau du pantalon (au niveau de la pliure des cuisses / du pubis). Autrement, comme ce sont des vĂȘtements qui sont relativement prĂšs du corps, sur un personnage qui ne fait pas de mouvement particulier et se tient bien droit, on n'a pas beaucoup de plis qui se crĂ©ent. Mais ceux que tu as placĂ©s sont bons :)
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Here is my drawing! (I don't know if this is the right place to send it but oh well...)
Thanks in advance!
VoilĂ mon dessin ! ( je sais pas si c'est ici qu'il faut l'envoyer mais bon...)
Merci d'avance
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Normally, you should have posted your drawing in the "Correction" section but it's not a big deal.
Just remember for next time ^^
If you can't find the way, it's: COMMUNITY --> FORUM --> MANGA --> the correction that corresponds to your exercise :)
So, your drawing is really not bad :)
You put a lot of effort into it and it shows
Let's take a closer look at this young lady ^^
Let's start from the top.
The folds on your lady's shirt are not pulled tightly enough, I think.
With tension and gravity, they should be more stretched downwards since her arms are lowered.
For the skirt, it's still a question of folds.
"Sailor-style" skirts have very specific, sharp, and straight folds.
In your drawing, you made the height between the skirt sections jagged. However, this doesn't work here. Fabric can't be folded and give that look.
Try folding a sheet of paper this way and you'll see that the spacing is very minimal or non-existent.
For the jacket, my major issue is with the knot.
A jacket around the hips is not the easiest to do and the best way to understand how it works is to look at photo references if you have any. (otherwise, take a photo of yourself in the outfit and pose as reference, thatâs what I often do ^^)
Don't hesitate to give thickness and volume to your clothes :)
Not all fabrics are thin like linen ^^
To finish with the socks.
This is a very personal opinion but I think that leg warmers do not work when they are high.
They are very thick socks with lots of material. Their own weight makes them fall to the shins or even ankles. so they really only work if they are low on the leg.
High socks in general are very tightly adhered to the leg precisely to prevent them from falling or sliding.
That's it! :)
Folds are really one of the most complex things to do when drawing clothes so don't get discouraged :)
It will come with time ^^
Normalement c'est dans "Correction" que tu aurais dĂ» poster ton dessin mais ce n'est pas grave.
Pense y juste la prochaine fois ^^
Si tu ne trouves pas le chemin c'est : COMMUNAUTE --> FORUM --> MANGA --> la correction qui correspond a ton exercice :)
Alors, ton dessin est vraiment pas mal :)
Tu tâes donnĂ© du mal pour le faire et ça se voit
Regardons donc cette jeune fille de prĂšs ^^
Commençons par le haut .
La chemise de ta demoiselle a des plis pas suffisamment tirés je trouve.
Avec la tension et la gravitĂ©, ils devraient ĂȘtre plus Ă©tirĂ©s vers le bas Ă©tant donnĂ© que ses bras sont baissĂ©s.
Pour la jupe, toujours une question de plis.
Les jupe style âmarinâ ont des plis spĂ©cifiques trĂšs nets et droits.
dans ton dessin, tu as fait la hauteur entre les parties de la jupe en crĂ©neaux. Hors cela ne fonctionne ici. Le tissu ne peut pas ĂȘtre pliĂ© et donnĂ© cela.
Essaie de plier une feuille de cette maniĂšre et tu verras que lâespacement est trĂšs faible voir pas prĂ©sent du tout.
Pour la veste, mon souci majeur vient du nĆud.
La veste sur les hanches câest pas le plus simple Ă faire et le meilleur moyen de comprendre comment ça fonctionne est de regarder des rĂ©fĂ©rences photo si tu en as. (sinon prends toi en photo avec les vĂȘtement et la position en ref, câest ce que je fais souvent ^^ )
NâhĂ©site pas Ă donner de l'Ă©paisseur et du volume Ă tes vĂȘtements :)
Tous les tissus ne sont pas fins comme le lin ^^
Pour terminer les chaussettes.
Pour le coup, câest un avis trĂšs personnel mais je pense que les guĂȘtres ne fonctionnent pas lorsqu'elles sont hautes.
Ce sont des chaussettes trĂšs Ă©paisses et avec beaucoup de matiĂšre. Leur propre poids les fait tomber au niveau des tibias voir des chevilles. donc elle fonctionne vraiment que si elles sont basses sur la jambe.
Les chaussettes hautes en gĂ©nĂ©ral sont collĂ©es Ă la jambe trĂšs serrĂ©e justement pour Ă©viter quâelles ne tombent ou glissent.
VoilĂ ! :)
Les plis câest vraiment une des choses les plus complexes Ă faire lorsquâon dessine des vĂȘtements donc ne te dĂ©courage pas :)
Ca va venir avec le temps ^^
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