So it's pretty crazy because your eyes are the right size, they are well placed (a bit too low for the lady), and well crafted with that. There's no issue with divergent gaze or anything.
But there's always one that is tilted for some obscure reason. It's less noticeable in the child, but I've marked the correct angle in green and the angle of the stray eye in red. If you correct the angle, you have perfect eyes.
For the boy, I think ultimately that his eyes are too much in profile, as if his face was turned more to the side than it is there. If you widen his eyes and rebalance the size (the one on the right is longer than the other) between the two, that seems better to me:
You still have a small issue with the tilt on the man's eye. You have this issue with the other two as well, but it's much milder and itâs fine as it is.
I'm a complete beginner, I'm just starting to draw so it's a bit of a disasterđ.
I think I did better with the woman and the child (even though I know it's far from good), but for the man, it's a real mess. I just can't get the eyes right in 3/4 view. If you have one or two tips to help guide me that would be great!
I wouldn't say it's a disaster, but you are missing a few keys ^^
Indeed, you did better with the girl and the child. I'll proceed in order:
The girl:
The eyes are well placed, but I don't know why you drew an outer line for the eyeball, the lashes at the outer corner of the eye are enough to close the eye ^^ And if you want the edge of the eye to be the eyeball, then the lashes are attached to it. But even though the eyes are well placed, they are too close to each other, remember: you should be able to fit an eye between them, and here that's not the case. The eyes are also generally very small for manga, if you look, they are about the same size as the mouth or nose, which are supposed to be much smaller. You also have the eyebrow marker which indicates their positioning and would show you how tiny the eyes are in her face. For a more European style, it would be perfectly correct, but in manga, it's too timid :)
The boy:
Here again we have eyes that are too small and too close, but additionally, they are misplaced. I traced the line of the face and indicated reference points you can use to position your elements ^^
The child:
Itâs not bad, he has one eye too close to the other (asymmetry, if you imagine him facing forward, his eyes would not be symmetrical at all).
Be careful, you tend to make the looks divergent too. Align your irises in the same direction, these kinds of things can be a matter of millimeters ^^ You often have the eye closest to us looking at us, and the other looking straight ahead. So you need to decide where you want to direct the gaze ^^
Attention, tu as tendance Ă faire des regards divergents aussi. Aligne bien tes iris dans la mĂȘme direction, ça peut se jouer au millimĂštre ce genre de choses ^^ Tu as souvent l'oeil le plus proche de nous qui nous regarde et l'autre qui regarde droit devant le personnage. Il faut choisir oĂč tu veux diriger le regard du coup ^^
The girl is impeccable. The child almost perfect too, you just reduced the eye too much (it narrows in width, but not in height).
For the boy, however, the placement is not good, and the eye is not "cut" at the edge of the face. We cheat a little so that it is always included in the face.
You might have gotten the topic wrong, but I'll correct you ^^
The nose is pretty good, you handle it well from a 3/4 angle and also from the side (the nose starts too low for a man (the dip at the top of the nose starts at eye level, see above)).
From the front, however, your nose is as wide as from a 3/4 or side view, which is strange. You might need to flatten it a bit to make it more vertical.
Le nez est plutĂŽt pas mal, tu t'en sors bien de 3/4 et pas mal de profil (le nez commence trop bas pour l'homme (le creux du haut du nez commence au niveau des yeux, voir au-dessus)).
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Here is the result for the eyes. I must admit that I found male eyes more difficult to draw. I would like your comments please! đ
Voici le rĂ©sultat pour les yeux. Je dois admettre que j'ai trouvĂ© les yeux masculins plus difficiles Ă dessiner. J'aimerais avoir vos commentaires svp ! đ
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So it's pretty crazy because your eyes are the right size, they are well placed (a bit too low for the lady), and well crafted with that. There's no issue with divergent gaze or anything.
But there's always one that is tilted for some obscure reason. It's less noticeable in the child, but I've marked the correct angle in green and the angle of the stray eye in red. If you correct the angle, you have perfect eyes.
Alors c'est assez dingue parce que, tes yeux ont la bonne taille, ils sont plutÎt bien placés (un peu trop bas pour la demoiselle), et bien réalisés avec ça.On n'a pas de souci de regard divergent ni rien.
Mais y en a toujours un qui est inclinĂ© pour une raison obscure. C'est moins flagrant chez l'enfant, mais je t'ai mis en vert le bon angle et en rouge l'angle de lâĆil dissident. Si tu corriges l'angle, tu a des yeux impeccables.
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Here is the correction!
Thank you for your quick responses!
Have a nice day
Voici la correction !
Merci pour vos réponses rapide !
Belle journée
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For the boy, I think ultimately that his eyes are too much in profile, as if his face was turned more to the side than it is there. If you widen his eyes and rebalance the size (the one on the right is longer than the other) between the two, that seems better to me:
Pour le garçon, je pense au final que ses yeux sont trop de profil, comme si son visage était davantage tourné vers le profil qu'il ne l'est là . Si tu élargis ses yeux et rééquilibre la taille (celui à droite est plus long que l'autre) entre les deux ça me semble mieux :
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18/04/2020
This way is much prettier
thank you very muchđ
cette façon est beaucoup plus jolie
merci beaucoupđ
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It's almost perfect :D
You still have a small issue with the tilt on the man's eye. You have this issue with the other two as well, but it's much milder and itâs fine as it is.
Other than that, I approve ;p
C'est presque parfait :D
Tu as encore juste un petit souci d'inclinaison sur l'oeil de l'homme. Tu as ce souci sur les deux autres aussi, mais de maniÚre bien plus légÚre et ça passe tel quel.
Hormis ça, je valide ;p
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05/06/2020
I am submitting the work after correction.
Have a good day
Je mets le travail aprĂšs correction.
Bonne journée
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09/08/2020
There's just the eye on the right side of the lady that is too small compared to the other; otherwise, the rest works well :)
Il y a juste l'oeil Ă droite de la demoiselle qui est trop petit par rapport Ă l'autre, sinon le reste marche bien :)
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I'm a complete beginner, I'm just starting to draw so it's a bit of a disasterđ.
I think I did better with the woman and the child (even though I know it's far from good), but for the man, it's a real mess. I just can't get the eyes right in 3/4 view. If you have one or two tips to help guide me that would be great!
Thanks in advance!
Je suis un gros débutant, je commence tout juste à dessiner donc c'est un peu
la catađ.
Je trouve que je m'en suis mieux sorti pour la femme et l'enfant (mĂȘme si je sais que c'est
loin d'ĂȘtre bien), mais pour l'homme c'est un vĂ©ritable massacre , je n'arrive pas du tout Ă faire les yeux,
de 3/4. Si vous avez un ou deux conseils pour m'aiguiller cela serait top !
Merciiii d'avance !
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I wouldn't say it's a disaster, but you are missing a few keys ^^
Indeed, you did better with the girl and the child. I'll proceed in order:
The girl:
The eyes are well placed, but I don't know why you drew an outer line for the eyeball, the lashes at the outer corner of the eye are enough to close the eye ^^ And if you want the edge of the eye to be the eyeball, then the lashes are attached to it. But even though the eyes are well placed, they are too close to each other, remember: you should be able to fit an eye between them, and here that's not the case. The eyes are also generally very small for manga, if you look, they are about the same size as the mouth or nose, which are supposed to be much smaller. You also have the eyebrow marker which indicates their positioning and would show you how tiny the eyes are in her face. For a more European style, it would be perfectly correct, but in manga, it's too timid :)
The boy:
Here again we have eyes that are too small and too close, but additionally, they are misplaced. I traced the line of the face and indicated reference points you can use to position your elements ^^
The child:
Itâs not bad, he has one eye too close to the other (asymmetry, if you imagine him facing forward, his eyes would not be symmetrical at all).
Be careful, you tend to make the looks divergent too. Align your irises in the same direction, these kinds of things can be a matter of millimeters ^^ You often have the eye closest to us looking at us, and the other looking straight ahead. So you need to decide where you want to direct the gaze ^^
I'm attaching a correction to guide you :)
Je ne dirais pas que c'est la cata, mais il te manque quelques clés ^^
Effectivement, pour la fille et l'enfant tu t'en es mieux sorti. Je vais procéder dans l'ordre :
La fille :
Les yeux sont bien placĂ©s, mais je ne sais pas pourquoi tu m'as mis un trait extĂ©rieur pour le globe oculaire, les cils du coin externe de l'oeil suffisent pour fermer l'oeil ^^ Et si tu veux que le bord de l'oeil soit le globe, alors tes cils y sont accolĂ©s. Mais mĂȘme si tes yeux sont bien placĂ©s, ils sont trop proches, rappelle-toi : tu dois pouvoir placer un oeil entre eux, et ici ce n'est pas le cas. Les yeux sont aussi globalement trĂšs petit pour du manga, si tu regardes, ils sont sensiblement de la mĂȘme taille que la bouche ou le nez, censĂ©s ĂȘtre bien plus petit. Tu as aussi le repĂšre des sourcils qui t'indique leur positionnement et t'aurais montrĂ© Ă quel point les yeux sont touuuuut petits dans son visage. Pour un style plus europĂ©en, ce serait tout Ă faire correct, mais en manga, c'est trop timide :)
Le garçon :
Alors ici on a à nouveau des yeux trop petits, trop proches mais en plus ils sont mal placés. Je t'ai tracé la ligne du visage et t'ai indiqué les points de repÚre que tu peux utiliser pour positionner tes éléments ^^
L'enfant :
C'est pas mal, il a un Ćil trop proche de l'autre (asymĂ©trie, si tu l'imagines de face, ses yeux ne seraient pas du tout symĂ©triques).
Attention, tu as tendance Ă faire des regards divergents aussi. Aligne bien tes iris dans la mĂȘme direction, ça peut se jouer au millimĂštre ce genre de choses ^^ Tu as souvent l'oeil le plus proche de nous qui nous regarde et l'autre qui regarde droit devant le personnage. Il faut choisir oĂč tu veux diriger le regard du coup ^^
Je te joins une correction pour t'aiguiller :)
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Here is my work before the correction.
Voici mon travail avant la correction.
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03/10/2020
That's pretty good :D
The girl is impeccable. The child almost perfect too, you just reduced the eye too much (it narrows in width, but not in height).
For the boy, however, the placement is not good, and the eye is not "cut" at the edge of the face. We cheat a little so that it is always included in the face.
I've attached a correction for you to see ^^
C'est pas mal tout ça :D
La fille est impeccable. L'enfant presque parfait aussi tu as juste trop réduit l'oeil (il se réduit en largeur, mais pas en hauteur).
Pour le garçon par contre, le placement n'est pas bon, et l'oeil n'est pas "coupé" au bord du visage. On triche un peu pour qu'il soit toujours inclu dans le visage.
Je t'ai joint une correction pour que tu visualises ^^
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04/10/2020
thank you for the correction.
merci pour la correction.
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Here is my work.
Voici mon travail.
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You might have gotten the topic wrong, but I'll correct you ^^
The nose is pretty good, you handle it well from a 3/4 angle and also from the side (the nose starts too low for a man (the dip at the top of the nose starts at eye level, see above)).
From the front, however, your nose is as wide as from a 3/4 or side view, which is strange. You might need to flatten it a bit to make it more vertical.
But it's really not bad at all, well done :)
Tu t'es trompé de sujet je crois mais je te corrige ^^
Le nez est plutĂŽt pas mal, tu t'en sors bien de 3/4 et pas mal de profil (le nez commence trop bas pour l'homme (le creux du haut du nez commence au niveau des yeux, voir au-dessus)).
De face par contre ton nez est aussi large que de 3/4 ou de profil, ce qui est Ă©trange. Il faudrait presque l'Ă©craser un peu pour qu'il soit plus vertical.
Mais c'est vraiment pas mal en tout cas, bravo :)
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