For the man, we're good, for the child, his eyes are a little too low. For the lady, however, be careful, her eyes are not symmetric or aligned at all.
I'm attaching a quick mini-correction ^^
Pay attention to the line on which your eyes are placed, it helps to see if it follows the logic of the rest of the face :)
Hmm, it's not quite there yet, you have one eye right out of two each time :)
You have misalignments almost everywhere, often one eye higher / lower than the other, tilted differently and sometimes too close to the nose (the lady) or too far (the child).
Don't hesitate to look at which line your eyes are on, it will help you spot if you have any placement errors.
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Mmh, ce n'est pas encore ça, tu as un oeil bon sur les deux à chaque fois :)
It's not quite there yet, but you're almost perfect on the child and the boy :)
For the young lady, her left eye is misplaced: too low, too close to the nose (look at the space between the nose line and each eye, it will jump out at you ^^) and tilted to the right.
For the boy, we were almost on a perfect, the farthest eye is just too small. And for the child, it's nitpicking, but the eye towards the back has a slight tilt at the top. It's subtle enough not to be bothersome, but since you have this issue on the girl as well, I prefer to point it out so you can be mindful of it next time :3
I'm attaching a small correction ;p
Pas maaaal :D
C'est pas encore tout à fait ça, mais tu es presque parfait sur l'enfant et le garçon :)
You've correctly grasped that emphasis was needed, but in your case, you went a bit too far ^^
Let's start with the positives: the child is almost perfect; I think it's one of the best I've seen so far :) There's just a slight asymmetry between the two eyes.
The girl is pretty good too, she just has the left eye way too big, especially compared to the other one which is much better proportioned ^^
The man, on the other hand, is too much. His eyebrows are smaller than his eyes; this almost never happens in reality. While one can choose to have really small eyebrows deliberately, that's not the case here. Your eyebrows are normal; it's the eye that's disproportionately large. And the one in the profile shouldn't touch the edge of the face. I've made a little sketch to illustrate this. I've also included a small correction so you can visualize it better đ
In terms of proportions, we're good; I have nothing to say about the young lady except that sheâs missing eyebrows ^^
The child isn't bad, but the eyes are a little too low (they drop below the nose line) and the one on the right is tilted (slanted) and a bit too large.
For the gentleman, same note for the farthest eye; it's also set a bit low. Little tip for the eyebrow: it goes on top of the brow ridge, the slightly pointed shape on the forehead that I indicated on the correction ^^
The other eye, however, is too large and much too wide apart. I've attached a little correction to make it clearer :3
Still needs work, but there are good things, and the slightly drooping look of the young lady is very gentle, it's very pretty đ
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En terme de proportions on est bons, je n'ai rien Ă redire sur la demoiselle si ce n'est qu'il lui manque les sourcils ^^
The only issue is with the lady where you have an eye that's offset (maybe afraid of going under the fringe?), a bit too low. If you draw a line connecting the bottom of the two eyes, you'll immediately see the problem ^^
Hello, great video! Here is my attempt, sorry I don't have a printer or a graphic tablet at home, so I copied the diagram as best as I could without taking too much time. I have indeed read My Hero Academia which I think is fantastic!
Arf, tricky, besides trying to trace from your screen it's going to be indeed a bit complicated ^^'
It makes my task a little harder, but I will judge solely on the placement of the eyes: it's pretty good. The eye on the right of the girl is a tad too small, but otherwise, it works well ^^
One might get the impression that the placement is not necessarily good because other facial features are misaligned (the nose for the boy and girl, for example), but I feel that we're doing quite well with the eyes ^^
It will be easier for you when we move on to the whole face then.
Ăa me complique un peu la tĂąche, mais je vais juger uniquement sur le placement des yeux : c'est plutĂŽt bon. LâĆil Ă droite de la fille est un chouille trop petit, mais sinon ça marche bien ^^
For the young lady, I corrected the eyes, it's very subtle, it's more a matter of symmetry than anything else (I corrected the upper and lower eyebrow line on the right and left).
For the boy, I made a sketch of the eye as it should be. The eye cannot be cut off cleanly by the edge of the face, it has volume and generally does not touch the edge before being really closer to the profile ^^
Apart from these small adjustments, it's all good for me âïž
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Not bad, you're close :D
For the man, we're good, for the child, his eyes are a little too low. For the lady, however, be careful, her eyes are not symmetric or aligned at all.
I'm attaching a quick mini-correction ^^
Pay attention to the line on which your eyes are placed, it helps to see if it follows the logic of the rest of the face :)
C'est pas mal, tu n'es pas loin :D
Pour l'homme on est bon, pour l'enfant, il a les yeux un chouille trop bas. Pour la demoiselle par contre, attention, ses yeux ne sont pas du tout symétrique ni alignés.
Je te joins une mini-correction rapide ^^
Regarde bien la ligne sur laquelle est placée tes yeux, ça permet de voir si ça suit la logique du reste du visage :)
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Hmm, it's not quite there yet, you have one eye right out of two each time :)
You have misalignments almost everywhere, often one eye higher / lower than the other, tilted differently and sometimes too close to the nose (the lady) or too far (the child).
Don't hesitate to look at which line your eyes are on, it will help you spot if you have any placement errors.
Mmh, ce n'est pas encore ça, tu as un oeil bon sur les deux à chaque fois :)
Tu as des dĂ©calages un peu partout, souvent un Ćil plus haut / bas que l'autre, inclinĂ© diffĂ©remment et parfois trop proche du nez (la demoiselle) ou trop loin (l'enfant).
N'hésite pas à regarder sur quelle ligne se trouve tes yeux, ça t'aidera à repérer si tu as des erreurs de placement.
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It's not quite there yet, but you're almost perfect on the child and the boy :)
For the young lady, her left eye is misplaced: too low, too close to the nose (look at the space between the nose line and each eye, it will jump out at you ^^) and tilted to the right.
For the boy, we were almost on a perfect, the farthest eye is just too small. And for the child, it's nitpicking, but the eye towards the back has a slight tilt at the top. It's subtle enough not to be bothersome, but since you have this issue on the girl as well, I prefer to point it out so you can be mindful of it next time :3
I'm attaching a small correction ;p
C'est pas encore tout à fait ça, mais tu es presque parfait sur l'enfant et le garçon :)
Pour la demoiselle, son Ćil sur la gauche est mal placĂ© : trop bas, trop proche du nez (regarde l'espace entre la ligne du nez et chacun des yeux, ça te sautera aux yeux ^^) et inclinĂ© vers la droite.
Pour le garçon, on Ă©tait presque sur un perfect, lâĆil le plus Ă©loignĂ© est simplement trop petit. Et pour l'enfant, c'est du chipotage, mais lâĆil vers le fond a une lĂ©gĂšre inclinaison sur le haut. C'est suffisamment lĂ©ger pour ne pas ĂȘtre dĂ©rangeant, mais comme tu as ce souci aussi sur la fille, je prĂ©fĂšre te l'indiquer pour que tu fasses attention lors des fois suivantes :3
Je te joins une petite correction ;p
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Thanks again for your valuable advice!
Merci encore pour tes precieux conseils!
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No worries, rest well ^^ Draw things you like, clear your mind, and take your time :3
Pas de soucis, repose-toi bien ^^ Dessine des choses qui te plaisent, aĂšre-toi l'esprit et prends ton temps :3
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You've correctly grasped that emphasis was needed, but in your case, you went a bit too far ^^
Let's start with the positives: the child is almost perfect; I think it's one of the best I've seen so far :) There's just a slight asymmetry between the two eyes.
The girl is pretty good too, she just has the left eye way too big, especially compared to the other one which is much better proportioned ^^
The man, on the other hand, is too much. His eyebrows are smaller than his eyes; this almost never happens in reality. While one can choose to have really small eyebrows deliberately, that's not the case here. Your eyebrows are normal; it's the eye that's disproportionately large. And the one in the profile shouldn't touch the edge of the face. I've made a little sketch to illustrate this. I've also included a small correction so you can visualize it better đ
Tu as bien saisi qu'il fallait accentuer, mais dans ton cas tu es allé un peu trop loin ^^
On va commencer par les bons points : l'enfant est quasi parfait, je crois que c'est l'un des plus réussi que j'ai vu jusque là :) Il y a juste une légÚre asymétrie entre ses deux yeux.
La fille est pas mal aussi, elle a simplement l'oeil à gauche beaucoup trop gros, surtout en comparaison de l'autre qui est bien mieux proportionné ^^
L'homme par contre, c'est trop. Ses sourcils sont plus petits que ses yeux : dans la rĂ©alitĂ© ça n'arrive quasi jamais. MĂȘme si on peut choisir volontairement de faire des touuuut petits sourcils, mais mais ça n'est ps le cas. Tes sourcils sont normaux, c'est l'oeil qui est dĂ©mesurĂ©. Et celui sur le profil ne devrait pas toucher le bord du visage. Je t'ai fait un petit croquis pour appuyer ça. Je t'ai joint une petite correction aussi pour que tu visualises mieux đ
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In terms of proportions, we're good; I have nothing to say about the young lady except that sheâs missing eyebrows ^^
The child isn't bad, but the eyes are a little too low (they drop below the nose line) and the one on the right is tilted (slanted) and a bit too large.
For the gentleman, same note for the farthest eye; it's also set a bit low. Little tip for the eyebrow: it goes on top of the brow ridge, the slightly pointed shape on the forehead that I indicated on the correction ^^
The other eye, however, is too large and much too wide apart. I've attached a little correction to make it clearer :3
Still needs work, but there are good things, and the slightly drooping look of the young lady is very gentle, it's very pretty đ
En terme de proportions on est bons, je n'ai rien Ă redire sur la demoiselle si ce n'est qu'il lui manque les sourcils ^^
L'enfant est pas mal, mais les yeux sont un petit peu trop bas (ils passent sous la ligne du nez) et celui sur la droite est incliné (en biais) et un poil gros.
Pour le monsieur, mĂȘme remarque pour l'oeil le plus Ă©loignĂ©, il est aussi placĂ© un peu bas. Petite astuce pour le sourcil : il se place au sommet de l'arcade sourciliĂšre, la forme un peu pointue sur le front que j'ai indiquĂ© sur la correction ^^
L'autre oeil par contre est trop grand et beaucoup trop écarté. J'ai joint une petite correction pour que ce soit plus clair :3
Encore Ă travailler, mais il y a de bonnes choses et le regard un peu tombant de la demoiselle est trĂšs doux, c'est trĂšs joli đ
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We're almost on a perfect :D
The only issue is with the lady where you have an eye that's offset (maybe afraid of going under the fringe?), a bit too low. If you draw a line connecting the bottom of the two eyes, you'll immediately see the problem ^^
Other than that, we're good đ
On est presque sur un perfect :D
Il n'y a que la demoiselle oĂč tu as un oeil dĂ©calĂ© (peur de passer sous la frange peut-ĂȘtre ?), un peu trop bas. Si tu tires une ligne qui relie le bas des deux yeux, tu verras tout de suite le souci ^^
A part ça on est bon đ
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VoilĂ mon essai..
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It's very pretty, very delicate. A bit like shojo style :3
Regarding your exercise, there are a few small adjustments, but overall it's quite good.
You reduce the size of the eye in depth a bit too much, I've enlarged it on the girl and the child.
For the boy, you placed the rear eye a tad too high, I've shown you the correct placement ^^
But otherwise, it's very good, well done đ
C'est trÚs joli, trÚs délicat. Typé shojo un peu :3
Concernant ton exercice, il y a des petits ajustements, mais globalement on est pas mal.
Tu diminues un peu trop la taille de l'oeil dans la profondeur, j'ai réagrandi sur la fille et l'enfant.
Pour le garçon, tu as placé l'oeil du fond un poil trop haut, je t'ai indiqué le bon placement ^^
Mais c'est trĂšs bien sinon, bravo đ
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Arf, tricky, besides trying to trace from your screen it's going to be indeed a bit complicated ^^'
It makes my task a little harder, but I will judge solely on the placement of the eyes: it's pretty good. The eye on the right of the girl is a tad too small, but otherwise, it works well ^^
One might get the impression that the placement is not necessarily good because other facial features are misaligned (the nose for the boy and girl, for example), but I feel that we're doing quite well with the eyes ^^
It will be easier for you when we move on to the whole face then.
Arf, compliquĂ©, Ă part essayer de dĂ©calquer depuis ton Ă©cran Ă©ventuellement ça va ĂȘtre compliquĂ© en effet ^^'
Ăa me complique un peu la tĂąche, mais je vais juger uniquement sur le placement des yeux : c'est plutĂŽt bon. LâĆil Ă droite de la fille est un chouille trop petit, mais sinon ça marche bien ^^
On peut avoir l'impression que le placement n'est pas forcément bon car d'autres éléments du visage sont décalés (le nez pour le garçon et la fille par exemple), mais j'ai l'impression que sur les yeux on est pas mal ^^
Ce sera plus simple pour toi quand on passera au visage en entier du coup.
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great class, as usual!
I had a lot of difficulty drawing the eyes for the girl...
Tell me what you think!
Have a good evening :)
super cours, comme d'habitude !
J'ai eu beaucoup de difficultés à dessiner les yeux pour la fille...
Dites-moi ce que vous en pensez !
Bonne soirée :)
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I really like your drawing style!
Well, we're not far from perfect here either ^^
For the young lady, I corrected the eyes, it's very subtle, it's more a matter of symmetry than anything else (I corrected the upper and lower eyebrow line on the right and left).
For the boy, I made a sketch of the eye as it should be. The eye cannot be cut off cleanly by the edge of the face, it has volume and generally does not touch the edge before being really closer to the profile ^^
Apart from these small adjustments, it's all good for me âïž
J'aime beaucoup ton coup de crayon !
Eh bien on est pas loin d'un perfect aussi ici ^^
Pour la demoiselle, j'ai corrigé les yeux, c'est trÚs subtil, c'est plus une question de symétrie qu'autre chose (j'ai corrigé la ligne de sourcil supérieure et inférieure à droite et à gauche).
Pour le garçon, je t'ai fait un croquis de lâĆil tel qu'il devrait ĂȘtre. L'oeil ne peut pas ĂȘtre coupĂ© tout net par le bord du visage, il a un volume et en gĂ©nĂ©ral il ne touche pas le bord avant d'ĂȘtre vraiment plus proche du profil ^^
A part ces petits ajustements, c'est tout bon pour moi âïž
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It's not a bad thing, when I look at my old drawings, I see what period I liked what, it's pretty funny ^^
Over time it ends up mixing and becomes a style that is our own đ
C'est pas une mauvaise chose, quand je regarde mes vieux dessins, je vois à quelle période j'ai aimé quoi, c'est assez rigolo ^^
Avec le temps ça finit par se mĂ©langer et devenir un style qui nous est propre đ
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