There are good things; the female face is flawless đź‘Ť
Overall, I notice a problem with symmetry in front-facing faces, that of the child is a very good example. There is more cheek on one side than the other. You also tend to add a chin easily (on the boy and the child). Don't forget that the eyes are supposed to stay in the middle of the face for teens/adults, and a bit below for children. If you add a chin, you inevitably shift the whole face ^^
I've attached a mini-correction of some faces, I'll let you go over all that :3 Also try to have the same face from all angles, so always the same length of chin, a similar shape of face, etc.
Je t'ai joint une mini-correction de certains visages, je te laisse repasser sur tout ça :3 Essaye aussi d'avoir le même visage sous tous les angles donc toujours la même longueur de menton, une forme similaire de visage, etc.
There are quite a few little things to revise. You seem more comfortable with the male face; from the front it looks cool, but watch out for symmetry (I'm saying this regarding his ears in particular ^^), and the profile isn't bad either. For him, it's good to go ✔️
The child from the front looks good too, but in profile his chin is too long: his eyes should be a bit below the midpoint of his face, so if he has too much chin, it brings his eyes towards the middle. So trim it down and you can go stronger with his nose ;p
The girl is the least successful, she is asymmetrical from the front and in profile she also has too much chin, which makes her eyes rise above the midline. And for the 3/4 angle, we are almost there, she lacks forehead (the forehead is often more voluminous than the cheeks, as in real life). I'm attaching a small correction, it's a small difference ;)
The girl is missing some skull from the side, you make the chin slightly too forward on the profiles, but otherwise it's impeccable ;p
However, I am going to correct you on the 3/4 view, the lady is missing some forehead and you've curved the middle line of the face too much so her chin is too offset
For the profile, you can lengthen the boy's nose a bit more and thus lengthen the face to match your front view. Don't forget to properly angle the jawline that goes up towards the ear, you're not doing it enough (I've attached the girl's profile to show you ^^
On the 3/4 views, however, there's a general lack of forehead, and for the child, you've really accentuated the roundness of the face (the central line), which has pushed his chin backwards. So, a round of corrections for all that :D
Hello leyley o/
Sur les vues de faces on est bon ^^
Sur le profil, tu peux allonger davantage le nez du garçon et donc allonger le visage pour être raccord avec ta vue de face. N'oublie pas de bien incliner le bout de machoir qui remonte vers l'oreille, tu ne le fais pas assez (je t'ai joint le profil de la fille pour te montrer ^^
It's not bad, on the 3/4 it lacks forehead, skull and the chin is shifted because the middle line of the face is too curved. But we are good on the front views ^^
Your front views are good! For the profile views, be careful as you tend to push the mouth forward, especially for the girl, and don't forget to properly angle the jawline that joins the ear. For the child, you've put a bit too much chin in profile as well ^^
In the 3/4 view, you have overly emphasized the size difference between the two eyes (even though we will cover this in the following lessons ;p). The hollow between the forehead and the cheek is where the eyes are positioned, so it appears that in your case, it is placed too high and there is also a lack of forehead. But the rest works well ;p
Not much to correct overall :D
Hello Emma !
Tes vues de face sont bonnes ! Tes vues de profil, attention tu as tendance à mettre la bouche vers l'avant, notamment pour la fille et n'oublie pas de bien incliner le trait de la mâchoire qui rejoint l'oreille. Por l'enfant tu as mis un peu trop de menton de profil aussi ^^
The young lady is missing a bit of skull in the 3/4 view, and the child in profile has too much chin (compare with the front view and the mouth slightly forward ^^). But it works very well as it is, I approve ✔️
Hello Pichan !
C'est quasi parfait :D
La demoiselle manque d'un peu de crâne en 3/4 et l'enfant de profil a trop de menton (compare avec la vue de face et la bouche un poil en avant ^^). Mais ça fonctionne très bien tel quel, je valide ✔️
Oh, that's not bad! The man is perfect, the child, you just placed his nose too high in profile, I realigned it according to the height you chose for the front view ^^
For the girl's 3/4 view, she's missing a bit of forehead and you rounded the center line of the face too much, which shifts the chin and makes it look like it's set back.
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There are good things; the female face is flawless đź‘Ť
Overall, I notice a problem with symmetry in front-facing faces, that of the child is a very good example. There is more cheek on one side than the other. You also tend to add a chin easily (on the boy and the child). Don't forget that the eyes are supposed to stay in the middle of the face for teens/adults, and a bit below for children. If you add a chin, you inevitably shift the whole face ^^
I've attached a mini-correction of some faces, I'll let you go over all that :3 Also try to have the same face from all angles, so always the same length of chin, a similar shape of face, etc.
Il y a de bonnes choses, le visage féminin est impeccable 👍
De manière générale, je remarque un problème de symétrie sur les visages de face, celui de l'enfant en est un très bon exemple. Il a plus de joue d'un côté que de l'autre. Tu as aussi tendance à rajouter du menton facilement (sur le garçon et l'enfant). N'oublie pas que les yeux sont censés rester au milieu du visage pour les ados / adultes, et un peu en-dessous pour les enfants. Si tu rajoutes du menton, tu décales forcément tout le visage ^^
Je t'ai joint une mini-correction de certains visages, je te laisse repasser sur tout ça :3 Essaye aussi d'avoir le même visage sous tous les angles donc toujours la même longueur de menton, une forme similaire de visage, etc.
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Oh, you nailed the most complicated angle: the 3/4 :D
For the front-facing view, be careful with symmetry, otherwise, we're good. And for the profile, indeed, you struggle, so here's a quick correction ;p
Oh, bah tu réussis l'angle le plus compliqué : le 3/4 :D
Pour le visage de face attention à la symétrie, sinon on est bon. Et pour le profil effectivement, tu as du mal, du coup, petite correction éclair ;p
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Have a good evening :)
Bonne soirée :)
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There are quite a few little things to revise. You seem more comfortable with the male face; from the front it looks cool, but watch out for symmetry (I'm saying this regarding his ears in particular ^^), and the profile isn't bad either. For him, it's good to go ✔️
The child from the front looks good too, but in profile his chin is too long: his eyes should be a bit below the midpoint of his face, so if he has too much chin, it brings his eyes towards the middle. So trim it down and you can go stronger with his nose ;p
The girl is the least successful, she is asymmetrical from the front and in profile she also has too much chin, which makes her eyes rise above the midline. And for the 3/4 angle, we are almost there, she lacks forehead (the forehead is often more voluminous than the cheeks, as in real life). I'm attaching a small correction, it's a small difference ;)
Il y a pas mal de petites choses à reprendre. Tu as l'air plus à l'aise sur le visage masculin, de face il est cool, attention à la symétrie (je dis ça par rapport à ses oreilles notamment ^^), de profil c'est pas mal aussi. Pour moi c'est bon pour lui ✔️
L'enfant de face est bon aussi, de profil il a un menton trop long : ses yeux doivent être un peu en-dessous de la moitié de son visage, du coup s'il a trop de menton, ça ramène ses yeux vers le milieu. Du coup à raboter et tu peux aller plus fort avec son nez ;p
La fille c'est la moins réussie, elle est asymétrique de face et de profil elle a aussi trop de menton, ça fait remonter ses yeux au-dessus de la ligne du milieu. Et pour le 3/4 on est quasi bon, elle manque de front (le front est souvent plus volumineux que les joues, comme dans la vraie vie). Je te joins une petite correction, ça se joue à pas grand-chose ;)
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You're doing very well ^^
The girl is missing some skull from the side, you make the chin slightly too forward on the profiles, but otherwise it's impeccable ;p
However, I am going to correct you on the 3/4 view, the lady is missing some forehead and you've curved the middle line of the face too much so her chin is too offset
Tu t'en sors très bien ^^
La fille manque de crâne de profil, tu fais le menton légèrement trop en avant sur les profils, mais sinon c'est impec ;p
Je vais par contre te faire une correction pour le 3/4, la demoiselle manque de front et tu as un peu trop courbé la ligne du milieu du visage du coup son menton est trop décalé
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For the front views, we're good ^^
For the profile, you can lengthen the boy's nose a bit more and thus lengthen the face to match your front view. Don't forget to properly angle the jawline that goes up towards the ear, you're not doing it enough (I've attached the girl's profile to show you ^^
On the 3/4 views, however, there's a general lack of forehead, and for the child, you've really accentuated the roundness of the face (the central line), which has pushed his chin backwards. So, a round of corrections for all that :D
Sur les vues de faces on est bon ^^
Sur le profil, tu peux allonger davantage le nez du garçon et donc allonger le visage pour être raccord avec ta vue de face. N'oublie pas de bien incliner le bout de machoir qui remonte vers l'oreille, tu ne le fais pas assez (je t'ai joint le profil de la fille pour te montrer ^^
Sur les 3/4 par contre, ça manque de front globalement et pour l'enfant tu as beaucoup marqué l'arrondi du visage (le trait central) du coup ça a décalé son menton vers l'arrière. Du coup tournée de corrections pour tout ça :D
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It's not bad, on the 3/4 it lacks forehead, skull and the chin is shifted because the middle line of the face is too curved. But we are good on the front views ^^
C'est pas mal, sur le 3/4 ça manque de front, de crâne et le menton est décalé car la ligne de milieu du visage est trop courbe. Mais on est bon sur les vues de face ^^
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Your front views are good! For the profile views, be careful as you tend to push the mouth forward, especially for the girl, and don't forget to properly angle the jawline that joins the ear. For the child, you've put a bit too much chin in profile as well ^^
In the 3/4 view, you have overly emphasized the size difference between the two eyes (even though we will cover this in the following lessons ;p). The hollow between the forehead and the cheek is where the eyes are positioned, so it appears that in your case, it is placed too high and there is also a lack of forehead. But the rest works well ;p
Not much to correct overall :D
Tes vues de face sont bonnes ! Tes vues de profil, attention tu as tendance à mettre la bouche vers l'avant, notamment pour la fille et n'oublie pas de bien incliner le trait de la mâchoire qui rejoint l'oreille. Por l'enfant tu as mis un peu trop de menton de profil aussi ^^
Sur le 3/4 tu as trop marqué la différence de taille entre les deux yeux (même si on le verra dans les cours suivants ;p). Le creux entre le front et la joue est l'endroit où se positionne les yeux, du coup on voit que chez toi, il est placé trop haut et ça manque un peu de front aussi. Mais le reste fonctionne bien ;p
Pas grand-chose Ă corriger au final :D
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It's almost perfect :D
The young lady is missing a bit of skull in the 3/4 view, and the child in profile has too much chin (compare with the front view and the mouth slightly forward ^^). But it works very well as it is, I approve ✔️
C'est quasi parfait :D
La demoiselle manque d'un peu de crâne en 3/4 et l'enfant de profil a trop de menton (compare avec la vue de face et la bouche un poil en avant ^^). Mais ça fonctionne très bien tel quel, je valide ✔️
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Oh, that's not bad! The man is perfect, the child, you just placed his nose too high in profile, I realigned it according to the height you chose for the front view ^^
For the girl's 3/4 view, she's missing a bit of forehead and you rounded the center line of the face too much, which shifts the chin and makes it look like it's set back.
Ohh c'est pas mal ! L'homme est parfait, l'enfant, tu as juste placé son nez trop haut de profil, j'ai recalé par rapport à la hauteur que tu as choisie de face ^^
Pour le 3/4 de la fille il manque un peu de front et tu as trop arrondi la ligne centrale du visage, ce qui décale le menton et donne l'impression qu'il est en arrière.
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