Still and always a drawing distorted by perspective, so I'm not sure if my correction is 100% correct, even after straightening the drawing a bit. You've done a good profile at the bottom right, except for the overly straight forehead, the rest is impeccable đ You seem to handle the frontal view quite well, but be careful with the position of the nose and mouth which you tend to place too low generally. Don't forget the ears either ^^ They are very important and help you with the structure as well. For the 3/4 view donât hesitate to make the forehead more prominent ^^ It's usually the most rounded part, be careful not to place the ears too high and the cross on the face should follow the volume of the face (it should curve as if you were drawing a cross on a balloon, it wonât be straight).
Take your time to position your elements, there's a lot to remember with a face and you need to be mindful of symmetry, but with practice, it becomes almost automatic ^^
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That's pretty good, actually what you did isn't wrong but it's not manga enough, so a little correction ^^
Watch out for symmetry. From the side, in particular, you round it out and rehumanize everything. Think sharp chin specifically and don't hesitate to use angles :)
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C'est pas mal, en fait ce que tu as fait n'est pas faux mais pas assez manga, du coup, petite correction ^^
The front view works well, the side view is generally good too, just be careful not to make the chin and jaws too square / rounded.
In the 3/4 view, it falls a bit short (also be sure to take your photos from above, so there are no deformations due to perspective like here).
I'm attaching a small correction on the girl, but it's almost impeccable and by straightening the drawing, errors that I thought I saw were just deformations due to perspective, so something to note for the next photos ^^
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Still and always a drawing distorted by perspective, so I'm not sure if my correction is 100% correct, even after straightening the drawing a bit. You've done a good profile at the bottom right, except for the overly straight forehead, the rest is impeccable đ You seem to handle the frontal view quite well, but be careful with the position of the nose and mouth which you tend to place too low generally. Don't forget the ears either ^^ They are very important and help you with the structure as well. For the 3/4 view donât hesitate to make the forehead more prominent ^^ It's usually the most rounded part, be careful not to place the ears too high and the cross on the face should follow the volume of the face (it should curve as if you were drawing a cross on a balloon, it wonât be straight).
Take your time to position your elements, there's a lot to remember with a face and you need to be mindful of symmetry, but with practice, it becomes almost automatic ^^
Encore et toujours dessin dĂ©formĂ© par la perspective donc je ne sais pas si ma correction est 100% bonne, mĂȘme en ayant redressĂ© un peu le dessin. Tu as fait un bon profil en bas Ă droite, hormis le front trop droit, le reste est impeccable đ Tu as l'air de plutĂŽt bien gĂ©rer la vue de face, attention Ă la position du nez et de la bouche que tu as tendance Ă mettre trop bas de maniĂšre gĂ©nĂ©rale. N'oublie pas les oreilles aussi ^^ Elles sont trĂšs importantes et permettent de t'aider Ă construire aussi. Pour le 3/4 n'hĂ©site pas Ă bomber le front ^^ C'est cette partie lĂ qui est la plus bombĂ©e en gĂ©nĂ©ral, attention Ă ne pas trop remonter les oreilles et la croix sur le visage doit suivre le volume du visage (elle doit s'arrondir comme si tu dessinais une croix sur un ballon, elle ne sera pas toute droite).
Prends bien ton temps pour placer tes éléments, il faut se rappeler beaucoup de choses pour un visage et faire attention à la symétrie, mais avec la pratique, ça devient presque automatique ^^
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It's unlikely that I'll see it then ^^
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Il est peu probable que je le vois alors ^^
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That's pretty good, actually what you did isn't wrong but it's not manga enough, so a little correction ^^
Watch out for symmetry. From the side, in particular, you round it out and rehumanize everything. Think sharp chin specifically and don't hesitate to use angles :)
C'est pas mal, en fait ce que tu as fait n'est pas faux mais pas assez manga, du coup, petite correction ^^
Attention à la symétrie. De profil en particulier, tu arrondis et réhumanise tout. Pense menton pointu en particulier et n'hésite pas à utiliser des angles :)
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Oooh that's pretty good :D
The front view works well, the side view is generally good too, just be careful not to make the chin and jaws too square / rounded.
In the 3/4 view, it falls a bit short (also be sure to take your photos from above, so there are no deformations due to perspective like here).
I'm attaching a small correction on the girl, but it's almost impeccable and by straightening the drawing, errors that I thought I saw were just deformations due to perspective, so something to note for the next photos ^^
Ooooh c'est pas mal :D
La vue de face marche bien, la vue de profil est globalement pas mal aussi, fais juste attention à ne pas faire des menton et des mùchoires trop carrées / arrondis.
Sur la vue de 3/4 ça pĂȘche un petit peu (d'ailleurs attention Ă essayer de bien prendre tes photos de dessus, pour qu'il n'y ait pas de dĂ©formations dessus due Ă la perspective comme c'est ici le cas).
Je te joins une petite correction sur la fille, mais c'est quasi impeccable et en redressant le dessin, des erreurs que je pensais voir n'étaient que des déformations dues à la perspectives, donc à noter pour les prochaines photos ^^
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Jâai fais les exercises!
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