This perspective seems to be better understood now. There are a few minor perspective issues, and the front of the car is a bit short, but the overall structure is well done. Iâve made some corrections on top of your drawing (thereâs a lot of red, but that doesnât mean it was bad; itâs just that when you adjust the perspective, it requires changing quite a few things), but itâs good work.
Itâs clear that youâve understood it better, well done! For your side view, itâs good; you just need to make the wheels a little bigger. The front view is good; youâve understood the cabin well. The front of the car should just be a little bigger, and you havenât added the wheel arches on the wheels. The top view is better. For your perspective view, be careful, youâve made the cabin smaller compared to the last time; itâs a little too small now. Pay attention to the rear wheel arch, which is too low and goes into the wheel. Also, you havenât added the curve at the back of your car; itâs clearly visible in your side view, and we should be able to see it a little in the perspective view as well. In any case, itâs good work, youâve made progress! I think you can move on to the next step now.
Youâve done a great job with the car, well done! Looking at the top view, I would just say that the front of the car, including the hood, could be a little longer. For the front view, the base of the hood shouldnât start so high up, considering itâs not viewed from above. Even if itâs slightly wider at the base, we shouldnât see it so prominently. Iâve attached a photo retouch that I made using your front view. Otherwise, the side view is very good, but it would be good to have a bumper slightly in front of the wheel arches. In any case, itâs good work and I think itâs well understood, I approve :)
It looks like youâve got the hang of it! I just have a few minor observations. For example, at first glance, I think the front wheels are slightly too large, and in the rear, the fender should be behind the red body, not in front of it (itâs just a small detail). For the side view, the proportions are correct. We just donât see the fenders as thick from this angle, which gives the impression that the wheels are a little too high, when in reality, itâs more that the fenders extend slightly too far up. The bottom of the rear window is usually more square. You also forgot the bumper.
Good idea to break down the car into parts! Youâve created a partial front view; it would be nice to see the entire thing. Youâve done a good job; everything Iâve pointed out is just minor details; the basic concept is well understood.
You understood the car well, but you did make things a bit complicated for yourself with the perspective. You either exaggerated the distance (in a front view) or slightly angled the view, when we asked for views that were âdirectly from the front.â As a result, you ended up with some elements of the car in perspective in one direction and the rest directly from the front (like with your side view of the car, which is slightly angled and slightly from above). For this exercise, the goal is to visualize the measurements in simple viewing angles. You can explore more complicated angles later ^^. Your bottom left viewpoint works quite well, even if you made it a bit complicated. Iâve redone the others and straightened them out in the explanatory sketches. I hope you understand better now ;) Itâs good work in any case; you can see that youâve thought about it carefully ^^.
We can see all the elements of the car, youâve done a good job :) Just be careful not to draw too many lines next to each other, because afterwards it becomes difficult to tell which one is the correct one, and it looks a bit messy. If you canât manage it right away, thatâs okay, but you can try to take your time and go over it again, making the lines a bit clearer and more defined, once youâve found the overall shape. Since you didnât press too hard at the beginning, this might work. Otherwise, the interior of your car is too long, and the front is much too short. When you look at the photo, you can see that normally the front of the car is a bit longer than the interior. Apart from that, there are some minor perspective issues, but for now, itâs not too serious; the most important thing is the size of the elements. Afterwards, to understand better, try drawing the car from different angles: from the front, from the side, and from above. Good luck ;)
This is good work! Youâve understood the structure of this car quite well. In your side view, the cabin is a little too large compared to the front of the car, and the bumper is missing (and the wheels, but I think thatâs mainly because of limited space on your paper). The same goes for the top view: the front is too short, and normally the fenders donât continue behind the trunk of the car. Otherwise, youâve grasped the principle. In the perspective view, everything is there; itâs mainly an issue of perspective, which weâll work on in the following lessons. Iâve added some visual annotations. In any case, itâs good, and I think you can move on to the next exercise.
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Itâs clear that youâve understood it better, well done! For your side view, itâs good; you just need to make the wheels a little bigger. The front view is good; youâve understood the cabin well. The front of the car should just be a little bigger, and you havenât added the wheel arches on the wheels. The top view is better. For your perspective view, be careful, youâve made the cabin smaller compared to the last time; itâs a little too small now. Pay attention to the rear wheel arch, which is too low and goes into the wheel. Also, you havenât added the curve at the back of your car; itâs clearly visible in your side view, and we should be able to see it a little in the perspective view as well. In any case, itâs good work, youâve made progress! I think you can move on to the next step now.
On voit que c'est mieux compris bravo :) Pour ta vue de profil c'est bien, il faudrait juste les roues un peu plus grosses. Vue de face bien, tu as bien compris pour l'habitacle. L'avant de la voiture devrait juste ĂȘtre un peu plus gros et tu n'as pas fait les garde boue sur les roues. Vue de dessus c'est mieux compris :) Pour ta vue en perspective attention tu as rĂ©trĂ©cit l'habitacle par rapport Ă l'autre fois, lĂ il est un peu trop petit. Attention au garde boue Ă l'arriĂšre qui est trop bas il rentre dans la roue. Aussi tu n'as pas rajoutĂ© l'arrondi de l'arriĂšre de ta voiture, on le voit bien sur ta vue de profil, on devrait un peu le voir aussi sur la vue en perspective. En tous cas c'est du bon travail tu as progressĂ© ! Je pense que tu peux passer Ă la suite ^^
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Here is my study on cars.
Thank you!
Voici mon Ă©tude sur la voiture.
Merci !
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Youâve done a great job with the car, well done! Looking at the top view, I would just say that the front of the car, including the hood, could be a little longer. For the front view, the base of the hood shouldnât start so high up, considering itâs not viewed from above. Even if itâs slightly wider at the base, we shouldnât see it so prominently. Iâve attached a photo retouch that I made using your front view. Otherwise, the side view is very good, but it would be good to have a bumper slightly in front of the wheel arches. In any case, itâs good work and I think itâs well understood, I approve :)
Tu as bien compris la voiture, bravo ! Sur la vue de dessus je dirais juste que l'avant de la voiture avec le capot manque un peu de longueur. Pour la vue de face, la base du capot n'est pas censĂ© dĂ©marrer aussi haute vu qu'elle n'est pas vue de dessus. MĂȘme si c'est lĂ©gĂšrement plus large Ă la base on ne doit pas le voir autant. Je te joins une retouche photo que j'ai faite avec ta vue de face. Sinon pour la vue de profil trĂšs bien mais il faudrait un pare-choc un peu Ă l'avant des garde-boues. En tous cas c'est du bon travail qui je pense est compris, je valide :)
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It looks like youâve got the hang of it! I just have a few minor observations. For example, at first glance, I think the front wheels are slightly too large, and in the rear, the fender should be behind the red body, not in front of it (itâs just a small detail). For the side view, the proportions are correct. We just donât see the fenders as thick from this angle, which gives the impression that the wheels are a little too high, when in reality, itâs more that the fenders extend slightly too far up. The bottom of the rear window is usually more square. You also forgot the bumper.
Good idea to break down the car into parts! Youâve created a partial front view; it would be nice to see the entire thing. Youâve done a good job; everything Iâve pointed out is just minor details; the basic concept is well understood.
ça m'a l'air compris tout ça :) Il y a juste quelques dĂ©tails que je remarque, comme pour Ă la premiĂšre vue je pense que les roues avant sont un poil trop grandes, et Ă l'arriĂšre le garde boue passe devant la carrosserie rouge et non l'inverse (c'est du dĂ©tail encore). Pour la vue de profil ce sont les bonnes proportions, on ne voit juste pas les gardes boue aussi Ă©pais de ce point de vue, ce qui donne l'impression que les roues sont un peu hautes alors que c'est plutĂŽt les garde-boues qui montent lĂ©gĂšrement trop dessus. Le bas de la fenĂȘtre arriĂšre est plus carrĂ© en bas normalement. Tu as aussi oubliĂ© le pare-choc.
Bonne idée de décomposer la voiture ^^ Tu as fait une vue de face partielle, ça serait bien de la voir entiÚre :) Tu as bien travaillé, tout ce que j'ai relevé ne sont que des détails, la base est bien comprise :)
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Here are my drawings of the car. Iâm having some trouble with the perspective!
Thank you for your feedback.
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Voici mes essaies sur la voiture. j'ai des difficultés avec la perspective!
Merci de votre retour.
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You understood the car well, but you did make things a bit complicated for yourself with the perspective. You either exaggerated the distance (in a front view) or slightly angled the view, when we asked for views that were âdirectly from the front.â As a result, you ended up with some elements of the car in perspective in one direction and the rest directly from the front (like with your side view of the car, which is slightly angled and slightly from above). For this exercise, the goal is to visualize the measurements in simple viewing angles. You can explore more complicated angles later ^^. Your bottom left viewpoint works quite well, even if you made it a bit complicated. Iâve redone the others and straightened them out in the explanatory sketches. I hope you understand better now ;) Itâs good work in any case; you can see that youâve thought about it carefully ^^.
Tu as bien compris la voiture, mais tu t'es effectivement compliquĂ© la vie avec la perspective, Ă faire des perspectives soit exagĂ©rant la distance (vue de face) ou un peu tournĂ©es alors qu'on demande des vues "bien de face". Du coup tu te retrouve Ă avoir des Ă©lĂ©ments de ta voiture en perspective dans un sens et le reste bien de face (comme avec ta voiture de profil qui est un peu tournĂ©e et un peu de dessus). Pour cette exercice le but est de visualiser les mesures dans des angles de vue simple, les angles compliquĂ©s tu pourras voir ça plus tard ^^ Ton point de vue en bas Ă gauche fonctionne assez bien mĂȘme si tu t'es compliquĂ©e. Les autres je te les ai remis "droits" en croquis explicatifs. J'espĂšre que tu comprendras mieux ;) C'est du bon travail en tous cas, on voit que tu as bien rĂ©flĂ©chi ^^
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We can see all the elements of the car, youâve done a good job :) Just be careful not to draw too many lines next to each other, because afterwards it becomes difficult to tell which one is the correct one, and it looks a bit messy. If you canât manage it right away, thatâs okay, but you can try to take your time and go over it again, making the lines a bit clearer and more defined, once youâve found the overall shape. Since you didnât press too hard at the beginning, this might work. Otherwise, the interior of your car is too long, and the front is much too short. When you look at the photo, you can see that normally the front of the car is a bit longer than the interior. Apart from that, there are some minor perspective issues, but for now, itâs not too serious; the most important thing is the size of the elements. Afterwards, to understand better, try drawing the car from different angles: from the front, from the side, and from above. Good luck ;)
On voit tous les éléments de la voiture, tu as bien travaillé :) Fait attention à ne pas faire trop de traits les uns à cÎté des autres car aprÚs on ne sait plus trop lequel est le bon, ça fait un peu brouillon. Si tu n'y arrives pas dÚs le départ c'est pas grave mais tu peux essayer de prendre ton temps à repasser en plus propre un peu plus appuyé ce que tu veux quand tu as trouvé ta forme globale. Vu que tu n'as pas trop appuyé au départ ça peut marcher. Sinon l'habitacle de ta voiture est trop long et l'avant est beaucoup trop court, en regardant la photo on remarque que normalement l'avant de la voiture est un peu plus long que l'habitacle. Sinon il y a des petits soucis de perspective mais pour l'instant ce n'est pas trÚs grave, le plus important c'est la taille des éléments. Ensuite pour comprendre mieux essaie de faire la voiture sous différents angles : De face, de profil et de dessus. Bon courage ;)
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here are the different angles of the car.
voici les différents angles de la voiture
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This is good work! Youâve understood the structure of this car quite well. In your side view, the cabin is a little too large compared to the front of the car, and the bumper is missing (and the wheels, but I think thatâs mainly because of limited space on your paper). The same goes for the top view: the front is too short, and normally the fenders donât continue behind the trunk of the car. Otherwise, youâve grasped the principle. In the perspective view, everything is there; itâs mainly an issue of perspective, which weâll work on in the following lessons. Iâve added some visual annotations. In any case, itâs good, and I think you can move on to the next exercise.
C'est du bon travail ^^ Tu as plutÎt bien compris la structure de cette voiture ^^ Sur ta vue de profil l'habitacle est un peu grand par rapport à l'avant de la voiture et il manque le pare choc (et les roues, mais je pense que c'est par manque de place sur ta feuille surtout). Pour la vue de dessus pareil, lavant est trop court, et normalement les garde-boues ne continuent pas derriÚre le coffre de la voiture. Sinon le principe est compris ^^ Pour la voiture en perspective tout est là , c'est surtout un souci de perspective, ça sera travaillé avec les leçons suivantes ;) Je t'ai fait des annotations visuelles ^^ En tous cas c'est bien je pense que tu peux passer à la suite :)
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