I think Iâve seen your drawings before, but just in case!
Itâs pretty good, but there are some inconsistencies between certain views. The raised part in the middle of the lid doesnât appear in all of them, which is a problem since you indicate that this is where the boxâs handle attaches. You have an inverted perspective in the view on the far right, in the middle, but thatâs not a big deal, it can be fixed later ;p
Pay attention to the construction of the flap in the view right in the middle; Iâll show you what I mean with a small color code:
You just have a small mistake here; on the top of the lid, you forgot to put the volume indicator on the part that is actually the volume control (which you show in other views ^^).
Iâm just going to show you a couple of quick corrections on the 3D view of the camera, just for the sake of it, but otherwise, I approve; youâve understood the structure well.
Oh dear! As usual, after completing the exercise, I tell myself, "Well, I hope I understood it," and then when I look at the correction, I feel like I didn't "think" about it properly. I got caught up in the details right from the start, so I went off on a tangent right away...
I really struggle with mentally manipulating the objects; all I see is a blur, and my head feels like it's about to explode. đ
I'm going to redo the exercise, incorporating the elements from the correction when I have the courage to do so (I already have the camera, and it's stressing me out a lot).
Thank you for your valuable advice; I hope I have the strength and motivation to persevere. đ
Wow! I canât take it anymore! This darn toolbox is really getting on my nerves. Iâve done two sketches, and I still canât get a satisfactory result. Iâm giving up for now; Iâm going to switch to using a camera, and Iâll revisit this cursed toolbox later.
Well, well, I think youâre being too hard on yourself :)
This toolbox looks good. Okay, its proportions change from one view to the next, but we canât say that the structure is bad. Maybe spend a little more time at the beginning to really get your proportions right. Because, as youâve noticed, if the proportions arenât right, even with lots of nice details, it just doesnât work ^^
But for me, itâs good enough. Youâve got the idea. What you need is practice and to make sure you get your proportions right:3
Hello Stephmarieg ^^
Eh bien eh bien, tu es dur avec toi-mĂȘme je trouve :)
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Here is my toolbox. Thank you in advance for your feedback. đ
Voici ma caisse Ă outils. Merci d'avance pour votre avis đ
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I think Iâve seen your drawings before, but just in case!
Itâs pretty good, but there are some inconsistencies between certain views. The raised part in the middle of the lid doesnât appear in all of them, which is a problem since you indicate that this is where the boxâs handle attaches. You have an inverted perspective in the view on the far right, in the middle, but thatâs not a big deal, it can be fixed later ;p
Pay attention to the construction of the flap in the view right in the middle; Iâll show you what I mean with a small color code:
Il me semble avoir déjà vu tes dessins, mais dans le doute !
C'est plutĂŽt pas mal, mais tu as des incohĂ©rences entre certaines vues. La partie en volume sur le milieu du couvercle n'apparait pas partout, c'est problĂ©matique Ă©tant donnĂ© que tu nous indique que c'est lĂ que sâaccroche la poignĂ©e de la boite. Tu as une perspective inversĂ©e sur la vue toute Ă droite, au milieu, mais ce n'est pas grave, ça se corrigera pas la suite ;p
Attention Ă la construction de la voite sur la vue en plein milieu, je te montre ce que je veux dire avec un petit code couleur :
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I donât know why I posted this drawing twice. Sorry đ
And thank you for replying again just in case, thatâs kind of you đ
Je ne sais pas pourquoi j'ai postĂ© 2 fois ce dessin. DĂ©solĂ©e đ
Et merci de m'avoir rerĂ©pondu dans le doute, c'est gentil đ
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Here is my toolbox đ
Voici ma boĂźte Ă outils đ
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This is all very nice ^^
You just have a small mistake here; on the top of the lid, you forgot to put the volume indicator on the part that is actually the volume control (which you show in other views ^^).
The rest is very good đ
C'est trÚs chouette tout ça ^^
Tu as juste une petite erreur ici, sur le dessus du couvercle tu as oublié de mettre le volume sur la partie en volume justement (que tu montres sur d'autres vues ^^).
Le reste est trĂšs bien đ
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Itâs all working pretty well!
Iâm just going to show you a couple of quick corrections on the 3D view of the camera, just for the sake of it, but otherwise, I approve; youâve understood the structure well.
Ca fonctionne plutÎt bien tout ça ^^
Je te montre juste deux petites corrections rapides sur la vue 3D de la caméra, histoire de, mais autrement je valide, tu as bien compris la structure ;p
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I really struggle with mentally manipulating the objects; all I see is a blur, and my head feels like it's about to explode. đ
I'm going to redo the exercise, incorporating the elements from the correction when I have the courage to do so (I already have the camera, and it's stressing me out a lot).
Thank you for your valuable advice; I hope I have the strength and motivation to persevere. đ
J'ai vraiment du mal avec le fais de faire tourner les objets dans la tĂȘte, je vois que du flou et j'ai le crane qui bouillonne. đ
Je vais refaire une planche en intégrant les éléments de la correction quand j'en aurais le courage (j'ai déjà la caméra et ça me stress à mort).
Merci pour vos prĂ©cieux conseils, j'espĂšre avoir la force et la motivation de persĂ©vĂ©rer đ
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Well, well, I think youâre being too hard on yourself :)
This toolbox looks good. Okay, its proportions change from one view to the next, but we canât say that the structure is bad. Maybe spend a little more time at the beginning to really get your proportions right. Because, as youâve noticed, if the proportions arenât right, even with lots of nice details, it just doesnât work ^^
But for me, itâs good enough. Youâve got the idea. What you need is practice and to make sure you get your proportions right:3
Eh bien eh bien, tu es dur avec toi-mĂȘme je trouve :)
Elle est bien cette caisse Ă outils. Bon, ses proportions changent d'une vue Ă l'autre, mais on ne peut pas dire que la structure soit mauvaise. Passe peut-ĂȘtre davantage de temps au dĂ©but pour vraiment poser tes proportions. Car comme tu as pu le constater : si les proportions ne sont pas bonnes, mĂȘme avec pleins de jolis dĂ©tails, ça ne fonctionne pas ^^
Mais pour moi c'est suffisant, tu as compris, ce qu'il te manque c'est la pratique et bien poser tes proportions :3
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