Hello! For your car drawings, I suggest you take another look at the wheels, both from the front and from the side, paying particular attention to the proportions. You could also try drawing them from a three-quarter angle; that could be a good exercise. đ
This is excellent work; you can tell you put a lot of time into it! The overall shape of the car is well-captured, especially the proportions between the car's cabin and the hood. Where you seem to be having a little more trouble is with the front of the car, which is most noticeable in your top view and somewhat in the side view. You need to pay close attention to what is in front of what. The headlights should be positioned slightly in front of the very front of the car, the front wheel arches should extend a bit past the headlights, and finally, the bumper goes in front of all of that. And be careful not to forget the bumper in the front view ;) Take another look at the front of the car and don't hesitate to let me know if you don't understand something ^^
Thanks for the encouragement. Yes, I forgot to include the bumper in the front view (at the time I was drawing it, the mechanic must have removed it đ).
I understood the comments. I just had a little trouble visualizing the front of the car and forming a mental image to draw it.
But I promise Iâll pay more attention next time!
Great if you understood! Itâs true that this car isnât straightforward, which is why itâs important to take your time and examine it carefully. Good luck with the rest, youâre on the right track :)
The structure of your car is good; the interior might be a bit too long in relation to the front of the car, but otherwise, I think itâs good.
Keep up the good work!
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la structure de ta voiture est bien, l'habitacle est peut-ĂȘtre un peu grand en longueur par apport Ă l'avant de la voiture mais sinon pour moi elle est bien.
Continue comme ça !
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I had a little trouble understanding what was going on behind the car! (an extra seat? a trunk? and how is it all connected).
Thank you for your comments and feedback. See you soon! Guillaume.
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This is good work :) The proportions are quite well respected. Perhaps, in the side view, you could move the headlights and the bumper forward just a little bit, and lower the bottom of the car where you put your feet just a bit less (otherwise it will have problems with speed bumps ;) ). For the rear of the car, itâs difficult to really tell how it looks with the photo model; I donât think itâs the most important view. The most important thing is that itâs consistent in terms of proportions, and yours seems fine. I approve!
I can see that you put a lot of effort into these different shades of gray. Itâs beautiful and well-executed work :) Regarding your views, the perspective view is very good. The front view is also good, except that the top of the car (roof and window) is a bit too curved, whereas the base view shows that it is actually quite straight, and the bumper is a little too low. As for the side view, thatâs where it gets a little more complicated. First, the front of the car is a bit short compared to the cabin, which is too high. Regarding this same front part, normally the headlights extend a little beyond the front of the car, and the front of the fenders extends even further. You tend to use perspective for things that donât really need it when viewed head-on. For example, the running board appears to be viewed from above, and the bumper goes off in a strange direction. When you look directly at the running board, for example, the lines converge into a single line because everything is at the same height. The wheels are fine, the main problem is the one at the back, which touches the fender, which could make it difficult to roll. I made a quick modification of your side view on the computer so you can see better what I mean ^^
In any case, itâs good work, and I think youâve generally understood how this car is shaped :)
This car looks great, youâve done a good job! It seems like you understand how itâs made, except for the running board, which isnât quite right. Thereâs a perspective issue at the front of the car with the rear wheel, the bumper, and the fenders, which give the impression that the front of the car is going in a different direction from the rest of it. Also, the rear wheel is tilted a bit to the side. Iâll sketch out an explanation on top of it! Now, think about drawing this car from different angles, such as from the side and from the front!
This is good work, you just got a few things mixed up. Your side view isnât really a side view, which is why youâre having trouble with the perspective â your car is shown from a slightly overhead and slightly frontal angle. If you drew your car perfectly from the side, without considering the perspective of the top and front, you would probably have a clearer understanding. As it is, your car is tapering too much towards the front, and some elements are shown perfectly in profile (the wheels, the running board, etc.), while the rest are in perspective, which makes it lack coherence. Also, you tilted the cabin when it should be straight. Thereâs also an issue with the wheels and fenders; the fenders arenât aligned, and the wheels are sinking into the car, so you need to lower them relative to the fenders.
Regarding the top view, itâs also good work with a few flaws. You correctly noticed that the car tapers towards the front. However, the front of the car tapers, but the fender area remains straight. The front of the car is slightly too long and thin, and you forgot the headlights and the bumper.
For the front view, itâs not bad; you just need to straighten the bumper, and the beginning of the front area of the car doesnât rise as much. When we look at the front of the car, we notice that the front area tapers significantly on the sides, but the top changes very little in height; it doesnât reduce much. Also, normally, from the front, we shouldnât see the rear wheel area rising.
Iâm making a lot of comments, but the details of the car are well understood, especially regarding the bodywork; itâs well done ^^ This is good work, and I think youâre not far from understanding it better. Iâm attaching some visual corrections for the elements that I think are clearer visually ;)
Yes, drawing a car isnât easy, but I think you did a pretty good job! You seem to have understood how it works quite well.
Regarding the perspective view, I think you drew it a bit more from the side than the basic model. We can see this with the less wide windshield, which seems to be turned more. Since the rear of the car doesnât extend as far back, it seems less consistent to make the rear wheel so small, as it no longer matches the perspective youâve created. But itâs not the perspective exercise yet, so itâs not too important, because the overall construction is good.
Your side and top views are good; you just need to move the windshield forward a little more.
The front view is also good; you just need to make the interior a little less tall and slightly wider at the top. Overall, this is good work, well done!
Bonjour Centig,
Et oui c'est pas facile la voiture, mais je trouve que tu t'en es bien sorti ! Tu as plutĂŽt bien compris comment elle fonctionne ^^
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It looks like you understood the exercise; you can move on to the next one! đđ
On voit que tu as compris l'exercice, tu peux passer Ă la suite !đđ
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Thank you for your advice.
Merci de vos conseils
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Tu pourrais Ă©galement faire celle de 3/4., cela pourrait ĂȘtre un bon exerciceđ
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It was complicated... but I had a great time, and I laughed a lot because I feel like I created a caricature đ!
Thank you for your time and have a good evening!
CompliquĂ© compliquĂ© ... mais j'ai passĂ© un trĂ©s bon moment, j'ai beaucoup rit car j'ai l'impression d'avoir fait une caricature đ !
Merci pour votre temps et bonne soirée !
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This is excellent work; you can tell you put a lot of time into it! The overall shape of the car is well-captured, especially the proportions between the car's cabin and the hood. Where you seem to be having a little more trouble is with the front of the car, which is most noticeable in your top view and somewhat in the side view. You need to pay close attention to what is in front of what. The headlights should be positioned slightly in front of the very front of the car, the front wheel arches should extend a bit past the headlights, and finally, the bumper goes in front of all of that. And be careful not to forget the bumper in the front view ;) Take another look at the front of the car and don't hesitate to let me know if you don't understand something ^^
C'est du beau travail, on voit que tu y as passĂ© du temps ! La forme globale de la voiture est comprise, notamment les proportions entre l'habitacle de la voiture et le capot. LĂ oĂč tu as plus de mal c'est au niveau du devant de la voiture, on le voit surtout sur ta vue de dessus et un peu sur la vue de profil. Il faut bien faire attention Ă qu'est-ce qui est devant quoi. Les phares doivent ĂȘtre positionnĂ©s un peu Ă l'avant du bout de la voiture, les garde-boue des roues avant doivent un peu dĂ©passer les phares, et enfin, le pare-choc va devant tout ça. Et attention Ă l'oubli du pare-choc sur la vue de face ;) Observe bien de nouveau l'avant de la voiture et n'hĂ©sites pas Ă me dire si tu n'as pas compris ^^
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Thanks for the encouragement. Yes, I forgot to include the bumper in the front view (at the time I was drawing it, the mechanic must have removed it đ).
I understood the comments. I just had a little trouble visualizing the front of the car and forming a mental image to draw it.
But I promise Iâll pay more attention next time!
merci pour l'encouragement, effectivement j'ai oubliĂ© le pare choc dans la vue de face (au moment ou je l'ai dessinĂ©, le garagiste Ă dĂ» l'enlever đ )
j'ai bien compris les remarques, j'ai eu juste un peu de mal à lire l'avant de la voiture et à m'en faire une idée mentale pour la dessiner...
mais je ferai plus attention c'est promis !
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More views to follow đ
Autres vues suivront đ
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The structure of your car is good; the interior might be a bit too long in relation to the front of the car, but otherwise, I think itâs good.
Keep up the good work!
la structure de ta voiture est bien, l'habitacle est peut-ĂȘtre un peu grand en longueur par apport Ă l'avant de la voiture mais sinon pour moi elle est bien.
Continue comme ça !
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I had a little trouble understanding what was going on behind the car! (an extra seat? a trunk? and how is it all connected).
Thank you for your comments and feedback. See you soon! Guillaume.
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voici mes voitures...
j'ai eu un peu de mal pour comprendre ce qui se passait derriÚre la voiture! (un siÚge supplémentaire? un coffre? et comment le tout est articulé).
merci pour les observations et remarques. Ă bientĂŽt! Guillaume.
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This is good work :) The proportions are quite well respected. Perhaps, in the side view, you could move the headlights and the bumper forward just a little bit, and lower the bottom of the car where you put your feet just a bit less (otherwise it will have problems with speed bumps ;) ). For the rear of the car, itâs difficult to really tell how it looks with the photo model; I donât think itâs the most important view. The most important thing is that itâs consistent in terms of proportions, and yours seems fine. I approve!
C'est du bon travail :) Les proportions sont plutĂŽt bien respectĂ©es, juste sur la vue de profil peut-ĂȘtre avancer un poil plus les phares et le pare-choc, et descendre un peu moins bas le bas de la voiture lĂ oĂč on pose les pieds (sinon elle aura des problĂšmes sur les dos d'Ăąne ;) ). Pour l'arriĂšre de la voiture, difficile de savoir vraiment comment ça se passe avec le modĂšle photo, je ne pense pas que ce soit la vue la plus importante, le tout est que ce soit cohĂ©rent niveau proportions, et la tienne me paraĂźt bien. Je valide !
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Hereâs my first attempt at drawing a car... I had a lot of trouble with the wheels... đ
Thereâs still a lot of work to do!
Thanks in advance for your feedback!
Voici mon premier essai sur la voiture... J'ai eu beaucoup de difficultĂ© avec les roues... đ
Y'a du boulot !
Merci d'avance pour les retours !
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I can see that you put a lot of effort into these different shades of gray. Itâs beautiful and well-executed work :) Regarding your views, the perspective view is very good. The front view is also good, except that the top of the car (roof and window) is a bit too curved, whereas the base view shows that it is actually quite straight, and the bumper is a little too low. As for the side view, thatâs where it gets a little more complicated. First, the front of the car is a bit short compared to the cabin, which is too high. Regarding this same front part, normally the headlights extend a little beyond the front of the car, and the front of the fenders extends even further. You tend to use perspective for things that donât really need it when viewed head-on. For example, the running board appears to be viewed from above, and the bumper goes off in a strange direction. When you look directly at the running board, for example, the lines converge into a single line because everything is at the same height. The wheels are fine, the main problem is the one at the back, which touches the fender, which could make it difficult to roll. I made a quick modification of your side view on the computer so you can see better what I mean ^^
In any case, itâs good work, and I think youâve generally understood how this car is shaped :)
Je vois que tu t'es appliquĂ©e avec toutes ces valeurs de gris. C'est du beau travail soignĂ© :) Concernant tes vues, celle en perspective est trĂšs bien. Celle de face est bien aussi, il y a a juste le haut de la voiture (toit et vitre) que tu as fait trop courbĂ© alors qu'on voit sur la vue de base que c'est plutĂŽt droit, et le pare-choc est un peu trop bas. Concernant la vue de profil, c'est lĂ que ça se complique un peu. PremiĂšrement, l'avant de la voiture est un peu court par rapport Ă l'habitacle qui lui est trop haut. Concernant ce mĂȘme avant, normalement les phares dĂ©passent un peu de l'avant de la voiture, et l'avant des garde-boue s'avance encore plus loin. Tu as tendance Ă mettre en perspective des choses qui n'ont pas besoin de l'ĂȘtre quand on est bien en face. Par exemple le marche pied a l'air vu de dessus, et le pare-choc part dans une direction bizarre. quand on se met bien en face du marche pied par exemple, les traits se rejoignent en une simple ligne car tout est Ă la mĂȘme hauteur. Pour les roues ça va, le problĂšme est surtout celle Ă l'arriĂšre qui touche le garde-boue, ce qui risque de rendre le roulement difficile. J'ai fait une rapide modification de ta vue de profil sur ordinateur, pour que tu vois mieux ce que je veux dire ^^
En tous cas c'est du bon travail, je pense que tu as globalement compris comment est cette voiture :)
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This car looks great, youâve done a good job! It seems like you understand how itâs made, except for the running board, which isnât quite right. Thereâs a perspective issue at the front of the car with the rear wheel, the bumper, and the fenders, which give the impression that the front of the car is going in a different direction from the rest of it. Also, the rear wheel is tilted a bit to the side. Iâll sketch out an explanation on top of it! Now, think about drawing this car from different angles, such as from the side and from the front!
Elle est soignĂ©e cette voiture, tu as bien travaillĂ© ! Il me semble que tu as compris comment elle est faite, sauf au niveau du marche pied oĂč c'est pas vraiment fait comme ça. Il y a un souci de perspective Ă l'avant de la voiture avec la roue arriĂšre, le pare choc et les garde-boue qui donnent l'impression que l'avant de la voiture part dans une direction diffĂ©rente du reste de la voiture. Aussi, la roue Ă l'arriĂšre est un peu penchĂ©e sur le cĂŽtĂ©. Je te fais un gribouillis explicatif par dessus ! Maintenant pense Ă faire cette voiture sous diffĂ©rents angles, de profil et de face par exemple !
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This is the car I worked so hard on, and in the end, I took some liberties with the rear of the car, which I think looks better this way.
La voiture pour laquelle jâai galĂšrĂ© et pour finir jâai pris des libertĂ©s sur lâarriĂšre de la voiture que jâai trouvĂ© plus stylĂ© comme ça
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This is good work, you just got a few things mixed up. Your side view isnât really a side view, which is why youâre having trouble with the perspective â your car is shown from a slightly overhead and slightly frontal angle. If you drew your car perfectly from the side, without considering the perspective of the top and front, you would probably have a clearer understanding. As it is, your car is tapering too much towards the front, and some elements are shown perfectly in profile (the wheels, the running board, etc.), while the rest are in perspective, which makes it lack coherence. Also, you tilted the cabin when it should be straight. Thereâs also an issue with the wheels and fenders; the fenders arenât aligned, and the wheels are sinking into the car, so you need to lower them relative to the fenders.
Regarding the top view, itâs also good work with a few flaws. You correctly noticed that the car tapers towards the front. However, the front of the car tapers, but the fender area remains straight. The front of the car is slightly too long and thin, and you forgot the headlights and the bumper.
For the front view, itâs not bad; you just need to straighten the bumper, and the beginning of the front area of the car doesnât rise as much. When we look at the front of the car, we notice that the front area tapers significantly on the sides, but the top changes very little in height; it doesnât reduce much. Also, normally, from the front, we shouldnât see the rear wheel area rising.
Iâm making a lot of comments, but the details of the car are well understood, especially regarding the bodywork; itâs well done ^^ This is good work, and I think youâre not far from understanding it better. Iâm attaching some visual corrections for the elements that I think are clearer visually ;)
C'est du bon travail, tu t'es juste embrouillé sur quelques trucs. Ta vue de profil n'en est pas vraiment une, du coup tu t'embrouilles avec la perspective, ta voiture est un peu de dessus et de un peu de face. Si tu faisais ta voiture bien pile de profil sans voir en perspective le dessus et l'avant, tu y verrais sûrement plus clair. Là ta voiture s'affine trop vers l'avant, et certains éléments sont vus bien de profil (les roues, le marche pied...) et le reste en perspective du coup ça manque de cohérence. Aussi, tu as penché l'habitacle alors qu'il est droit. Il y a aussi un souci au niveau des roues et garde boues, les gardes boue ne sont pas alignés, et les roues s'enfoncent dans la voiture, il faut les abaisser par rapport aux gardes boue.
Concernant la vue de dessus, c'est aussi du bon travail avec quelques défauts. Tu as bien remarqué que la voiture s'affine vers l'avant. Seulement, l'avant de la voiture s'affine mais pas la zone des garde-boue qui reste droite. L'avant de la voiture est légÚrement trop long et fin, et tu as oublié les phares et le pare choc.
Pour la voiture de face, c'est pas mal, il y a juste le pare-chocs à remettre droit, et le début de la zone avant de la voiture qui ne monte pas autant. Quand on observe l'avant de la voiture, on remarque que la zone avant de la voiture s'affine pas mal sur les cÎtés mais le dessus ne change que peu de hauteur, ça se réduit assez peu. Aussi, normalement de face on ne voit pas la zone des roues arriÚres qui remontent.
Je fais beaucoup de commentaires, mais les détails de la voiture sont bien compris, notamment sur la carrosserie, c'est soigné ^^ C'est du bon travail et je pense que tu n'es pas loin de mieux comprendre. Je te joins des corrections visuelles pour les éléments qui me semblent plus clairs en visuel ;)
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Yes, drawing a car isnât easy, but I think you did a pretty good job! You seem to have understood how it works quite well.
Regarding the perspective view, I think you drew it a bit more from the side than the basic model. We can see this with the less wide windshield, which seems to be turned more. Since the rear of the car doesnât extend as far back, it seems less consistent to make the rear wheel so small, as it no longer matches the perspective youâve created. But itâs not the perspective exercise yet, so itâs not too important, because the overall construction is good.
Your side and top views are good; you just need to move the windshield forward a little more.
The front view is also good; you just need to make the interior a little less tall and slightly wider at the top. Overall, this is good work, well done!
Et oui c'est pas facile la voiture, mais je trouve que tu t'en es bien sorti ! Tu as plutĂŽt bien compris comment elle fonctionne ^^
Pour la vue en perspective, j'ai l'impression que tu l'as faite un peu plus de profil que le modÚle de base, on le voit avec le pare brise moins large qui paraßt plus tourné par exemple. L'arriÚre de la voiture partant moins loin derriÚre, il parait moins cohérent de faire la roue arriÚre si petite car ça ne correspond plus à la perspective que tu as faite. Mais bon, ce n'est pas encore l'exercice de perspective, donc ce n'est pas trÚs grave, car la construction est bonne.
Tes vues de profil et dessus sont bien, il faudrait juste leur avancer un peu plus le pare-brise ^^
Vue de face bien aussi, il faudrait juste faire l'habitacle un peu moins haut et légÚrement élargi en haut. Globalement, c'est du bon travail tout ça, bravo :)