For the household robot, thereâs nothing to criticize; itâs very well done đđ
The car is not bad, but there are a few minor issues here and there, so Iâm going to correct them for you đ For the front view, itâs a little wide, but thatâs mainly because the wheels extend to the side, so your car doesnât look straight! The side view is good, but the rear seems a little strange to me; Iâm not sure if itâs the angle you took the photo from, or if you placed the wheel a little too high⊠But apart from these two small flaws, itâs good!
And finally, the ladybug; the first one is great, well done! đ The second one is good, but its body is a little flat; try to make it a little more rounded! The legs are a bit too big; they lift the insect up too much đ The problem is with the third view; the legs are pointing upwards, when they should be âfallingâ!
Apart from that, itâs good work, so keep it up đ You can move on to the next exercise; youâre doing well đ
Itâs not bad, youâre learning how an insect is constructed, which is a good start! In my opinion, the one at the bottom is better than the one at the top, but the legs are a little too long, and the neck and head are a bit too large đ Keep studying the construction of objects and their proportions, and donât forget to send me several different angles for each object đ
Thatâs good, youâre on the right track, keep it up đ
Hi, I completed the three exercises, which werenât easy, especially the one involving the car.
Here they are, Iâm looking forward to your feedback :)
Thanks.
Salut , j'ai fait les 3 exercices pas facile surtout la voiture.
VoilĂ j'attends les critiques :)
Merci
This is really good, you understood the exercise very well! The cleaning robot is perfect, congratulations đ For the ladybug viewed from above, I think the second pair of legs (the middle one) extends a little too far towards the back, but apart from that tiny detail, it's great! For the car, also viewed from above, I think its "nose" is just a tiny bit too short (but Iâm just nitpicking, haha đ)
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Your work is really good!
For the household robot, thereâs nothing to criticize; itâs very well done đđ
The car is not bad, but there are a few minor issues here and there, so Iâm going to correct them for you đ For the front view, itâs a little wide, but thatâs mainly because the wheels extend to the side, so your car doesnât look straight! The side view is good, but the rear seems a little strange to me; Iâm not sure if itâs the angle you took the photo from, or if you placed the wheel a little too high⊠But apart from these two small flaws, itâs good!
And finally, the ladybug; the first one is great, well done! đ The second one is good, but its body is a little flat; try to make it a little more rounded! The legs are a bit too big; they lift the insect up too much đ The problem is with the third view; the legs are pointing upwards, when they should be âfallingâ!
Apart from that, itâs good work, so keep it up đ You can move on to the next exercise; youâre doing well đ
Ton travail est vraiment bien!
Pour le robot mĂ©nager il n'y a rien Ă redire, c'est trĂšs bien đđ
La voiture est pas mal, mais il y a quelques soucis par-ci par-lĂ , alors je vais te corriger tout ça đ Pour la vue de face, elle est un peu large, mais c'est surtout du au fait que les roues partent sur le cĂŽtĂ©, ta voiture n'a donc pas l'air droite! Pour la vue de profil c'est bien, mais l'arriĂšre me parait un peu bizarre, je ne sais pas si c'est l'angle sous lequel tu as pris la photo ou si tu as placĂ© la roue un peu trop haut... Mais mise Ă part ces deux petits couacs c'est bien!
Et finalement la coccinelle ; la premiĂšre est super, bravo! đ La seconde est bien, mais son corps est un poil plat, essaie de le bomber un petit peu! Au niveau des pattes elles sont un peu grandes, elles surĂ©lĂšvent beaucoup l'insecte đ LĂ oĂč ça coince c'est sur la troisiĂšme vue, les pattes sont dirigĂ©es vers le haut, alors qu'elles devraient "tomber"!
Mise Ă part ça, c'est du bon travail, alors continue comme ça đ Tu peux passer au prochain exercice, tu te dĂ©brouilles bien đ
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Here are my 4th (at the top) and 3rd ladybug sketches.
I tried to draw with clean lines (without lots of little pencil strokes đ) and quickly; itâs not easy!
And I think the proportions are off.
Voici mes 4em (en haut) et 3em croquis de coccinelle.
j ai essayĂ© de dessiner avec des traits nets (sans petits coups de crayon đ ) et rapidement , c est pas Ă©vident!
Et je pense que ça déconne niveau proportions
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Itâs not bad, youâre learning how an insect is constructed, which is a good start! In my opinion, the one at the bottom is better than the one at the top, but the legs are a little too long, and the neck and head are a bit too large đ Keep studying the construction of objects and their proportions, and donât forget to send me several different angles for each object đ
Thatâs good, youâre on the right track, keep it up đ
C'est pas mal, tu es en train d'Ă©tudier comment l'insecte est construit, c'est un bon dĂ©but! Celui d'en bas est mieux que celui d'en haut selon moi, mais les pattes sont un petit peu trop longues, le cou et la tĂȘte un peu trop imposants đ Continue de bien Ă©tudier la construction des objets, les proportions et n'oublie pas de m'envoyer plusieurs angles de vues pour chaque objets đ
C'est bien tu es sur le bon chemin, continue comme ça đ
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Here they are, Iâm looking forward to your feedback :)
Thanks.
VoilĂ j'attends les critiques :)
Merci
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This is really good, you understood the exercise very well! The cleaning robot is perfect, congratulations đ For the ladybug viewed from above, I think the second pair of legs (the middle one) extends a little too far towards the back, but apart from that tiny detail, it's great! For the car, also viewed from above, I think its "nose" is just a tiny bit too short (but Iâm just nitpicking, haha đ)
Keep it up, itâs great đ See you soon đ
C'est vraiment bien, tu as trĂšs bien compris l'exercice! Le robot mĂ©nager est un sans faute, fĂ©licitations đ Pour la coccinelle vue de dessus j'ai l'impression que la deuxiĂšme paire de patte (celle de du milieu) part un petit peu trop vers l'arriĂšre, mais mise Ă part ce minuuuuscule dĂ©tail c'est top! Pour la voiture aussi vue de dessus, j'ai l'impression que son "nez" est un poiiiiil trop court (mais je chipote ahaha đ)
Continue comme ça, c'est super đ Ă trĂšs bientĂŽt đ
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Mais je suis la pour ça :)