The household robot is well done, just pay attention to the side view; thereâs something off with the top of the first cylinder, but apart from that, itâs good!
For the ladybug, itâs quite good, but the neck in the top view is a little too wide and rectangular!
And finally, your car, the idea is very good, but there are a few small issues! For the side view, pay attention to the symmetry of the wheels, but also to the front of the car; here, itâs as if a small part is missing đ The front view is good, but I still advise you to redo it; you seem to be having some trouble drawing the ânoseâ of the car, its proportions, etc. Observe the reference carefully and try again đ The 3/4 view is really good, well done!
Maybe try sharpening your pencil well; your lines seem a little âroughâ. Also, try to avoid small, sketchy lines, which gives your drawings a âmessyâ look đ
I had a chance to look at your drawings, and theyâre not bad at all, youâre on the right track! These exercises are complicated, so donât worry if you donât get it right on the first try! I suggest you carefully observe the references before you start đ You have a lot of good elements in your drawings, but your lines are a little shaky, which makes it difficult to âreadâ your drawing!
Keep going like this, itâs really good. I still suggest you try the car again, as itâs the most difficult. You really need to understand how itâs constructed and its different elements! See you soon and happy drawing đđ
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Your work is really good đ
The household robot is well done, just pay attention to the side view; thereâs something off with the top of the first cylinder, but apart from that, itâs good!
For the ladybug, itâs quite good, but the neck in the top view is a little too wide and rectangular!
And finally, your car, the idea is very good, but there are a few small issues! For the side view, pay attention to the symmetry of the wheels, but also to the front of the car; here, itâs as if a small part is missing đ The front view is good, but I still advise you to redo it; you seem to be having some trouble drawing the ânoseâ of the car, its proportions, etc. Observe the reference carefully and try again đ The 3/4 view is really good, well done!
Maybe try sharpening your pencil well; your lines seem a little âroughâ. Also, try to avoid small, sketchy lines, which gives your drawings a âmessyâ look đ
Keep it up, itâs good work! đ
Ton travail est pas mal du tout đ
Le robot ménager est bien, fais juste attention à la vue de profil, il y a quelque chose qui cloche au niveau du sommet du premier cylindre, mais mise à part cela c'est bien!
Pour la coccinelle, c'est pas mal du tout, mais le cou sur la vue d'en haut est un petit peu trop large et rectangulaire!
Et finalement ta voiture, l'idĂ©e est trĂšs bonne, mais il y a quelques petits couacs! Pour la vue de profil, fais attention Ă la symĂ©trie des roues, mais aussi Ă l'avant de ta voiture, ici c'est comme s'il lui manquait une petite partie đ La vue de face est pas mal, mais je te conseille tout de mĂȘme de la refaire, on voit que tu as un souci pour dessiner le "nez" de la voiture, ses proportions etc, re-observe bien la rĂ©fĂ©rence et tente de te relancer đ La vue de 3/4 est vraiment bien, bravo!
Essaie peut-ĂȘtre de bien tailler ton crayon, ton trait paraĂźt un petit peu "grossier", essaie aussi d'Ă©viter les petits traits, qui rend un aspect "brouillon" Ă tes desins đ
Continue comme ça, c'est du bon travail! đ
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My name is MĂ©lody and Iâm 12 years old. Iâve been passionate about drawing since I was 8, and my parents enrolled me in these classes.
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MĂ©lody đ
Bonjour, ci dessus le lien de mes dessins, si jamais je peux les poster une a une.
Je m'appelle Mélody j'ai 12ans. Passionnée par le dessins depuis l'ùge de 8ans, mes parents m'ont offert ces cours.
bonne continuation
a bientĂŽt
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I had a chance to look at your drawings, and theyâre not bad at all, youâre on the right track! These exercises are complicated, so donât worry if you donât get it right on the first try! I suggest you carefully observe the references before you start đ You have a lot of good elements in your drawings, but your lines are a little shaky, which makes it difficult to âreadâ your drawing!
Keep going like this, itâs really good. I still suggest you try the car again, as itâs the most difficult. You really need to understand how itâs constructed and its different elements! See you soon and happy drawing đđ
J'ai pu regarder tes dessins, c'est pas mal du tout, tu es sur la bonne voie! Ces exercices sont compliquĂ©s, alors ne t'inquiĂšte pas c'est normal si tu n'y arrives pas du premier coup! Je te conseille de bien observer les rĂ©fĂ©rences avant de te lancer đ Tu as plein de bons Ă©lĂ©ments dans tes dessins, mais ton trait est un petit peu tremblant, ce qui rend difficile la "lecture" de ton dessin!
Continue comme ça, c'est pas mal du tout, je te conseille tout de mĂȘme de re-tenter la voiture, qui est la plus difficile! Il faut bien que tu comprennes comment elle est construite et ses diffĂ©rents Ă©lĂ©ments! Ă bientĂŽt et bon dessin đđ